I Wish

I wish,
everyone on this earth,
be happy..!
I wish,
no one in this world,
be lonely..!
i wish,
everyone on this earth,
gets what they need..!
I wish,
everyone helps the other,
in need..!
i wish,
everyone be away
from greed..!
i wish,
there be no discrimination, on
the basis of cast, color or creed..!

I wish,
everyone is blessed, with
a best friend in need..!
I wish,
no trees ever be, without
leaves...!
I wish,
everyone be gifted, with
eternal peace...!
I wish,
our earth  be enriched,
with greenery...!

i wish,
everything on this earth be, as
it is supposed to be....!
i wish,
every butterfly,
always spreads peace....!
I wish,
the birds always sing,
melodiously.........!


i wish,
our earth be the best place to see,
enriched with,  LOVE, PEACE and HARMONY....!


so that,
one day even when God sees,
he's bound to say.....
"oh, that's heavenly...!!"
this is the best place, i could ever see..
because, here dwells, humanity,
and this is something,
which makes this place, really,
lovely........!!
the real place,
where i should actually be.....
truly.....!

Author's Note

thank you very much for reading.....
please give your reviews and rate it...!!!

Reviews

[annie lee]

You have described Paradise, and if it existed here on Earth, it would be doubly so. I guess I am too cynical to envision this world, since I am blinded by the way it is today. If everyone had your faith, your integrity, your energy -- maybe it would work. You are a beautiful light and I do not wish to dim that in any way. Hold your lamp high, Saumya, and maybe you can begin to change this world. Brava.

[Kathy Van Kurin]

'I wish'
Saumya,
If wishes came true... It is hope which brings the motivation to see the good. Lovely poem.
Kathy

[Jamestown]

I pray, your wishes come true, this world of ours would be so much better.
Great piece of work!

[lyss]

I love the way you wrote this and how you make your points with the different colors :)

[topsyturvy]

We all wish for these things too. It's like what's the word... Utopia? I think we can achieve this first and foremost within ourselves before it is reflected to others. I mean, like inner peace.

[Jack Buckner]

Very dreamlike! Thank you for sending me the request!

[CBH]

I completely agree! Life would be at its greatest if everyone took this poem, and applyed it to their own lives. World peace WILL set us free.

[KAin]

Sometimes I hold up my hand and grasp it into a fist. After a while, I tell people that what I'm holding onto is hope. Saumya, your works are always filled with such light and goodwill. Keep up the good work!

[Saumya]

thanks Landred:) for that really hopeful review:)

[Sarmelendez]

Its very colorful and a very good write i really enjoyed it thanks for sharing

Sarah :)

[DogDrawler]

Wow. A very colorful poem. And a wonderful masterpiece. :)

[L.Edward]

Beautiful sentiment. I commend it and share it. I count my blessings daily. One of the greatest blessings is to realize that we can be free from suffering simply by being what we seek in the world. And in the most uncanny fashion the world rises up to meet you and give you all the love and energy necessary to make that a reality right where you are.