Ask Your Heart...

easiest way to deal with life..

When nothing goes well in life,
and, you don't know, why,
just take, a deep sigh,
sit, and, ask yourself, why..?

When you have done,
everything, you could do,
and still feel, deprived,
just take, a deep sigh,
sit, and ask your heart, why..?

When everything you planned,
went totally wrong,
and you don't know, why,
just take, a deep sigh,
sit, and ask your heart, why..?

When all you thought,
did no more last,
and you don't know, why,
just take, a deep sigh,
sit, and ask your heart, why..?

Heart, you know, is a gift from God,
to all those beings,who want to last...

He gave us, body, and  soul,
but gave the heart,
to make these pure.....

The thoughts, and advices,
which arises in your heart,
are the words,
directly from God..!!

So, always listen,
to your heart,
because, its the best gift,
to you, from, God..

Trust it,
Hear it,
follow it,
and, you'll be, your best friend in need..
and, moreover,
A great, Human being indeed...!

Author's Note

pleeeeeeease give your reviews , and,i request this to every reader
and it would be great, if you could also rate it....!!

Reviews

[Aethereal]

This is a poem with a wise message. If could use a little more rhythm. I wrote two verses that you may keep for your self to show you what I mean by more rhythm. I overlapped the rhyme using a seven syllable line followed by a five syllable line where all accents match in meter. This may be sung as a song:

Heart

When there's trouble in your life
just take a deep sigh.
Medication for your strife
may be found nearby.

Your best guide is deep inside,
an eternal tie,
where no truths may ever hide.
Just ask your heart why.

[Krystal17]

This was a beautiful. So heart felt and emotional xoxox

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Good job girlie. :)

[Jack...]

This was wonderfully written and carries a beautiful message and offers great advice. Very nice my friend.

[Prritiy]

a wonderful composition, loved it :)

[Kristin Lee]

Always listen your heart indeed! Best advice in the world :) I like your overall message. It's a fun poem. Could use some cleaning up - line speration, elimination of commas - to help to general flow. But all in all I think it's good.

[Rita L. Sev]

Very good rhyme, and a comforting message. I would get rid of several of the commas, especially early in the poem; they interrupt the flow a bit. Overall, well done!

[AdorableDreams]

I really, really love those one. So deep and amazing!

[Ency Bearis]

a good use of rhyme scheme that make this poem beautiful with such message

[Baby Ricochet]

Some good rhymes. Good job