Ask Your Heart...

easiest way to deal with life..

When nothing goes well in life,
and, you don't know, why,
just take, a deep sigh,
sit, and, ask yourself, why..?

When you have done,
everything, you could do,
and still feel, deprived,
just take, a deep sigh,
sit, and ask your heart, why..?

When everything you planned,
went totally wrong,
and you don't know, why,
just take, a deep sigh,
sit, and ask your heart, why..?

When all you thought,
did no more last,
and you don't know, why,
just take, a deep sigh,
sit, and ask your heart, why..?

Heart, you know, is a gift from God,
to all those beings,who want to last...

He gave us, body, and  soul,
but gave the heart,
to make these pure.....

The thoughts, and advices,
which arises in your heart,
are the words,
directly from God..!!

So, always listen,
to your heart,
because, its the best gift,
to you, from, God..

Trust it,
Hear it,
follow it,
and, you'll be, your best friend in need..
and, moreover,
A great, Human being indeed...!

Author's Note

pleeeeeeease give your reviews , and,i request this to every reader
and it would be great, if you could also rate it....!!

Reviews

[Aethereal]

This is a poem with a wise message. If could use a little more rhythm. I wrote two verses that you may keep for your self to show you what I mean by more rhythm. I overlapped the rhyme using a seven syllable line followed by a five syllable line where all accents match in meter. This may be sung as a song:

Heart

When there's trouble in your life
just take a deep sigh.
Medication for your strife
may be found nearby.

Your best guide is deep inside,
an eternal tie,
where no truths may ever hide.
Just ask your heart why.

[zainul]

This is song of sacred heart.
Enjoyed reading.

[Saumya]

thank you so much...!!!
:)

[zainul]

You are always welcome,my sweet friend. :)

[Saumya]

:)

[zainul]

:)

[Sami Khalil]

"Heart, you know, is a gift from God,
to all those beings,who want to last...

He gave us, body, and soul,
but gave the heart,
to make these pure.....

The thoughts, and advises,
which arises in your heart,
are the words,
directly from God..!!"
A very honest and good write...Bravo...:)

[Saumya]

thank you soooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much.....!!!!!!
this made my day...!!!
:) :)

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. Glad to know...You are welcome...

[Saumya]

:)

[Sami Khalil]

:):):)

[She With Eyes Like Unsh..]

Very good! I really liked it!

[Saumya]

thank you sooooooooooooooooooooo much...!!1

[Leslie Philibert]

I am impressed by this, and I often notice that the standard of writing from India is very high, you must be doing something right over there...good work

[Saumya]

i believe, that for a writer to write well, two things are really important:
1.good thoughtread morei believe, that for a writer to write well, two things are really important:
1.good thought
2. unique presentation
these are the things, we pay attention to, and consequently, get the opportunity to dwell in the readers heart as you...!!
nothing else..!!
well, thank you sooooo much for your precious review...!!!
:)
take care..

[Becky C Strukamp]

Words have no truer been spoken or written. This is a very powerful poem. Well Done!

[Saumya]

thank you sooooooooooooooo much dear....!!!
:)

[annie lee]

What truly lovely words! I really like the structure and the repetitive phrases; it build the reader's involvement so that when you put the resolution to the reader, it is graceful and eloquent. Many people cannot get beyond the sigh and the why; this would be a wonderful poem for these people -- truly all people -- to read. It is an instant remedy for discouragement.
Your exhortations sound very genuine.

[CBH]

very encouraging!

[KAin]

Strong work here, Saumya. If I could make a suggestion, it would be to ease up a little on your punctuation - it's not necessary to have so many ellipses, I think - but that's just my personal opinion. I just find they can be quite distracting if overused.
But, that said, I liked this poem, and I liked the message. Good, heartfelt poetry, short and sweet.

[Saumya]

thank you soooooooooooooooooooooooooo much..!!!
this is one the precious reviews i could get,
thanx a lot..!!!
:)

[Debbie_Philly]

Very beautifully written... love the subject... :)

[Saumya]

thank you sooooooo much..!!! :)

[MOON]

Beautiful write truly enjoyed.