Ask Your Heart...

Ask Your Heart...

A Poem by Saumya
"

easiest way to deal with life..

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When nothing goes well in life,
and, you don't know, why,
just take, a deep sigh,
sit, and, ask yourself, why..?

When you have done,
everything, you could do,
and still feel, deprived,
just take, a deep sigh,
sit, and ask your heart, why..?

When everything you planned,
went totally wrong,
and you don't know, why,
just take, a deep sigh,
sit, and ask your heart, why..?

When all you thought,
did no more last,
and you don't know, why,
just take, a deep sigh,
sit, and ask your heart, why..?

Heart, you know, is a gift from God,
to all those beings,who want to last...

He gave us, body, and  soul,
but gave the heart,
to make these pure.....

The thoughts, and advices,
which arises in your heart,
are the words,
directly from God..!!

So, always listen,
to your heart,
because, its the best gift,
to you, from, God..

Trust it,
Hear it,
follow it,
and, you'll be, your best friend in need..
and, moreover,
A great, Human being indeed...!

© 2013 Saumya


Author's Note

Saumya
pleeeeeeease give your reviews , and,i request this to every reader
and it would be great, if you could also rate it....!!

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This is a poem with a wise message. If could use a little more rhythm. I wrote two verses that you may keep for your self to show you what I mean by more rhythm. I overlapped the rhyme using a seven syllable line followed by a five syllable line where all accents match in meter. This may be sung as a song:

Heart

When there's trouble in your life
just take a deep sigh.
Medication for your strife
may be found nearby.

Your best guide is deep inside,
an eternal tie,
where no truths may ever hide.
Just ask your heart why.



Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Very nice optimistic poem...Enjoyed:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Nice write!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Saumya

11 Years Ago

thank you..!!
these are words of wisdom. excellent poem.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Saumya

11 Years Ago

thank you...!!
great

Posted 11 Years Ago


Saumya

11 Years Ago

thank you..!!
Very inspirational!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Grey

11 Years Ago

It's a song! It means that you should always wear a smile :)
Saumya

11 Years Ago

alright, i got it...!!!
:) :) :) :) :)
Grey

11 Years Ago

lol very good :D
take comfort in what brings you relief my dear poet, and know that asking one's heart is the source of enlightenment. terrific write!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Saumya

11 Years Ago

thank you sooooo much for the appreciative review...!!!
really happy that you liked it....!!read more
Nicely done. :) I love the message of this. Good work!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Saumya

11 Years Ago

thank you sooo much dear,
glad you liked it....!!!!
:)
You offer wise advise and words of praise to God!! This is lovely and is certainly an encouragement to me to love and serve Him as best as I can by sharing the gifts He has given mankind!!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Saumya

11 Years Ago

thank you sooo much dear, for the lovely review....!!!
:)
A moving piece...Everybody can relate to it :)
It teaches you in some way and gives you inspiration also:)
Heart is way stronger than brain...when brain stops only heart is there for you always :)
I loved this poem :)
Keep writing !!

Your Friend
Akshat

Posted 11 Years Ago


Saumya

11 Years Ago

thanks a lot for the appreciating review......!!!
:)
Akshat♥

11 Years Ago

You are welcome dear :)
I listen to my heart but somehow it gets me into trouble. Don't know why God wants me into get into trouble. Nicely penned and gives a lot of hope. Cheers!!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Saumya

11 Years Ago

cheers to you too..!! :)
always have a deep faith in your heart, because, whatever it says, is.. read more
Becky C Strukamp

11 Years Ago

Words well spoken!!

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