Thinking Beyond The Thoughts.....

a set of almost unanswerable questions....

I don't know, why,
at some phases of life,
we have to deeply, cry..??

I don't know, why,
people see everything,
except, what is right...??

I don't know, why,
we humans also,
cant fly in the sky..??

I don't know, why,
the mountains are high,
the rivers deep,
and the sky, so bright..??

I don't know, whats,
in the holy places,
which, gives us,
eternal peace....!

I don't know, whats,
the magic, in music,
which makes, the listeners,
literally, enthusiastic...??

I don't know, whats,
so great, in books,
which makes the readers,
deeply, optimistic..??

I don't know, whats,
so sweet, about smile,
which even, makes the others smile..??

I don't know, whats,
so deep,in pain,
that, no one wants,
to bear it again....???

I don't know, whats,
that makes sun shine,
the fountains flow,
and the nature,
perfectly, fine....??

The answer, i guess,
is the same, every time, that,
"GOD, our heavenly father,
made this earth ,so fine,
so that, here, on this universe,
the glory of humanity shines....
therefore, we are to these things, destined,
so that, our joys, and glory,
never outshines...."!!!!!!

so,thank you God,
for the world,so fine,
and, for this majestic gift,
to we mankind....!!

Author's Note

hope, you would love to read this......
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Reviews

[Ravyne Hawke]

A lovely poem that allows the reader to ponder and question along with the writer. The color change distracts instead of adds to the poem.. punctuation all over the place again.. and you just need one question mark to make your point. I think you would be better off not using punctuation until you learn the rules of usage.. just a suggestion.

[Mark]

Our faith makes all things possible. :) So many questions, but you end with their answer. it is good.

[Phantom Heart]

my favorite stanza is, "I don't know, whats,
the magic, in music,
which makes, the listeners,
literally, enthusiastic...??"
I say, its love that really keeps humanity going because truthfully, love and good will always out weigh the bad. I think that the reason people never want to feel pain again because it literally is a constant reminder that we want to feel happy and good! I enjoyed reading your poem. Thank you for sharing with us!

[Onku Ghosh]

A thought provoking poem...............................so many why's and what's.The answer to all your queries is in god's hands.You have ended the poem with right words
I don't know your age .This writing seemed a little kiddish to me.Please don't take offence

[Avinash]

Tough to answer these questions but may life is all about finding these answers...and it is a pathless journey more easily felt than expressed...but this poem is one beautiful attempt.

[Astro]

In your questions you wrote a few times "I don't know what's" this is not usually how a question is put. You could say "I don't know what is..?" or "I don't know what it is...?" This poem poses a lot of different questions to think about so, I'd say it is definitely thought provoking.

[Roopal]

i'm very spiritual.. thank you for sharing this piece... there are so many things in life we don't understand.. but we are so thankful for having them. this poem makes us realize how much gifted and blessed we are..!! :)

[Dr. Wood ?]

May your God always be there for you

[smilempsn]

nicely written...

[Rhea752]

We feel but we do not know. This is a great pondering on human nature!! well done!! Keep writing!! :)

[SyberRose]

A lovely poem from your heart Saumya:)