Thinking Beyond The Thoughts.....

a set of almost unanswerable questions....

I don't know, why,
at some phases of life,
we have to deeply, cry..??

I don't know, why,
people see everything,
except, what is right...??

I don't know, why,
we humans also,
cant fly in the sky..??

I don't know, why,
the mountains are high,
the rivers deep,
and the sky, so bright..??

I don't know, whats,
in the holy places,
which, gives us,
eternal peace....!

I don't know, whats,
the magic, in music,
which makes, the listeners,
literally, enthusiastic...??

I don't know, whats,
so great, in books,
which makes the readers,
deeply, optimistic..??

I don't know, whats,
so sweet, about smile,
which even, makes the others smile..??

I don't know, whats,
so deep,in pain,
that, no one wants,
to bear it again....???

I don't know, whats,
that makes sun shine,
the fountains flow,
and the nature,
perfectly, fine....??

The answer, i guess,
is the same, every time, that,
"GOD, our heavenly father,
made this earth ,so fine,
so that, here, on this universe,
the glory of humanity shines....
therefore, we are to these things, destined,
so that, our joys, and glory,
never outshines...."!!!!!!

so,thank you God,
for the world,so fine,
and, for this majestic gift,
to we mankind....!!

Author's Note

hope, you would love to read this......
pleeeeeeaseeeeeeeee do read, rate, review ..!!!

Reviews

[Ravyne Hawke]

A lovely poem that allows the reader to ponder and question along with the writer. The color change distracts instead of adds to the poem.. punctuation all over the place again.. and you just need one question mark to make your point. I think you would be better off not using punctuation until you learn the rules of usage.. just a suggestion.

[Zero_Edge88]

Ah the idea of our thoughts that we don't perceive so easily are perceptible to the other person's eye. For are we not read in too deeply but instead sincerely too. For surely we are lighted up into the sky when these thoughts come from our minds. We are the future of our own life that we live in. A beautiful aspect of that is that when we think our thoughts start to count deeper and deeper making marks for everyone. :)

[Brian Angeles]

I must say you are talented with your writinb. And I meet it

[Pryde Foltz]

Yes, it is very important to be thankful for what we are given, even if we earned it. Well-penned. Thank you, Saumya.

[Glen Yumang Manese]

Again here you can do the same to the lines and still have the effectiveness...I'm concentrating more on the "Why" and "What" in the lines then the intent of the body of the write...sets me off as a reader in the lines...

[Rosaria_V]

I love how this poem lets you think and I feel your emotion :)

[Eddie Phillips]

Great poem. I read it earlier today but only now got to comment.

[Angel]

The Lord is the answer to all our questions.
I think Lori might be right about the punctuation. Perhaps your writing would be better without it for the time being. Too much of it takes away from the beauty of the poem...and your poems are lovely.

[B.J]

beautiful wonderful to read
I like the repetitiveness of I don't know what

[Prritiy]

Its beautiful.
The eternal questions and the splendid realization, The Lord above knows all, did all, does all, will do all and we have to see that the beauty given to us is preserved delicately.

[Patrick O'Neil]

Really well written, lots of questions and with a really good answer too.