Thinking Beyond The Thoughts.....

Thinking Beyond The Thoughts.....

A Poem by Saumya
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a set of almost unanswerable questions....

"
I don't know, why,
at some phases of life,
we have to deeply, cry..??

I don't know, why,
people see everything,
except, what is right...??

I don't know, why,
we humans also,
cant fly in the sky..??

I don't know, why,
the mountains are high,
the rivers deep,
and the sky, so bright..??

I don't know, whats,
in the holy places,
which, gives us,
eternal peace....!

I don't know, whats,
the magic, in music,
which makes, the listeners,
literally, enthusiastic...??

I don't know, whats,
so great, in books,
which makes the readers,
deeply, optimistic..??

I don't know, whats,
so sweet, about smile,
which even, makes the others smile..??

I don't know, whats,
so deep,in pain,
that, no one wants,
to bear it again....???

I don't know, whats,
that makes sun shine,
the fountains flow,
and the nature,
perfectly, fine....??

The answer, i guess,
is the same, every time, that,
"GOD, our heavenly father,
made this earth ,so fine,
so that, here, on this universe,
the glory of humanity shines....
therefore, we are to these things, destined,
so that, our joys, and glory,
never outshines...."!!!!!!

so,thank you God,
for the world,so fine,
and, for this majestic gift,
to we mankind....!!




© 2013 Saumya


Author's Note

Saumya
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A lovely poem that allows the reader to ponder and question along with the writer. The color change distracts instead of adds to the poem.. punctuation all over the place again.. and you just need one question mark to make your point. I think you would be better off not using punctuation until you learn the rules of usage.. just a suggestion.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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"Thinking Beyond The Thoughts"
Saumya,
This amazing creation; earth, space, oceans, seas, winds, and on and on. Is really a place for our pleasure and our blessing. God made it and formed all things for His glory and means for us to see and find the clues. Clues of Love as only our Lord could do in omniscient love. Though an imperfect world it so full of every manner of opportunity.
Why do people turn to God? We need to be loved. Perfect Love is the answer.Jesus came that we might have life and that more abundantly. His blood and sacrifice for a fallen and hurting world in need of redemption and freeing of guilt.
John 14:6: To read in proper context; God's word, the bible.
Jesus said in me is life and there is no other. Really nice poem!
Blessings,
Kathy

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Saumya

7 Years Ago

Hey Kathy! 😊

Thankyou so much for sharing your beautiful sentiments here.Im had yo.. read more
Kathy Van Kurin

7 Years Ago

Nice to hear from you too Saumya. Hope your enjoying this wonderful time of year. Stay happy. Stay h.. read more
Saumya

7 Years Ago

*smile* Yep, alls going good 😊Dear Kathy. Hope you're having a good time too?

Tha.. read more
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CRZ
Enjoyed this. You pointed out the basics of which God has placed on this earth. Other disregard them and try to make their own joys but individuals like us recognize the simple things in life that are so powerful!

Posted 11 Years Ago


The way you write is so nice because of how sincere it is and it's always dedicated to someone.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Good... Enjoyed going through!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Good... Enjoyed going through!

Posted 11 Years Ago


A grand opera of words communicated in a rising crescendo of understanding and inquiry before it falls backwards on itself to call it God. Its certainly in the questions we ask. Nicely done.

Posted 11 Years Ago


lovely poem with questions of some weight....!!

Posted 11 Years Ago


amen. Nicely penned Saumya

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Well - there are a lot of reasons we can't fly, Saumya. For instance, Pumpkin, my cat had lured a bird down from inside my chimney and when I was working on the computer I heard this weird fluttering sound.

Then I saw the bird had roosted on the little Hello Kitty home I had on my wall, like it was a birdhouse. And Pumpkin was right up against the wall with his head up waiting for the bird to leave so he could pounce on it.

I called up Rose and she said, first things first, put your cat in another room and close it so he can't get in. Then open your shutters and let out the bird. I tapped on the little paper house and the bird fell to the ground and wasn't moving at all.

I picked up the bird and was very surprised to find how light he was. Apparently birds are a lot lighter than regular animals. I then opened up the shutters and set him out on my balcony. After a moment he started moving again, apparently paralyzed earlier with fear from my cat, then flew away.

We can't fly because we are too heavy. Birds weigh near to nothing when I picked him up earlier and I suspect that is why they can fly so remarkably well.

Hope This Helps !


Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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