A letter To GOD....

this is a letter to GOD, on behalf of all human beings to show our love and concern for him..and ask some important question regarding the life today

O God, you are the one,
closest to our hearts...!!
our Angel in pain, and
redeemer in life's game;
without whom, living this life, for us,
is in vain..!!

You, are the one,
who knows, everything about us,
therefore, in real,
you only, are our best friend.
The one, who carefully listens to us,
and, puts us away, from, Life's TENSIONS,
by showering, rays of innocence, and diligence..!

O  GOD, my friend,
everyone  changes with the trend;
but you are the one, always with us, like
a great friend..!!

I ask, you answer;
i pray, you cherish;
i am defeated, you console me,
i am hopeless, you give me hope,
i am rejected, you give me the ways,
how my real talents can be showcased..
All of which, that, only a best friend,
and parents,
in this world, do for their children,
and friend..
therefore, you are a fine blend ,of
parents and friends;
whom, these  mere words, can't afford to define,
as,YOU and your powers are immense.....!!!

But, my dear friend, i write this letter to you today,
to ask ,some common questions, which is perturbing
human beings today;
they are the ones, whose answers seems,
uncertain,
so, my friend, i hope, you can surely answer
these, then.....

why are the poor, being rejected, and the
rich upgraded......??????
why are the girls, in our society, physically
defeated, and ill-treated by men......?????
why can't children, care , for their
older parents..???
Why is corruption, in this world
so prevalent..???
Will peace, come to this world  again.??

and most importantly.................

Will the world, really end....!!?

O God, these are some questions, which
make, we humans, disillusioned;
Therefore, answering these for you is really important;
because, we consider you as our dearest friend,
so, i know, you will definitely  calm our curiosity,
by answering these questions..

At last, I'd like to thank you ,my friend,
for, patiently, listening to the pathetic condition '
of we humans,
who are really disturbed, by these dreadful conditions,
and hope, that you will shortly
answer these question..

To conclude this, I'd say, that,
o God, we human beings really adore you,
urge you to take care, wish you a calm goodbye,
and heartly wish, that, may your glory always, gleam
in heaven...!!
     
        thannking you,

yours lovingly daughter and friend,
saumya

Author's Note

i hope you would really love and enjoy, reading this
pleeeeeeeeeeeassssssee do rate and comment..!!

Reviews

[Dana Alsamsam]

this is lovely and sweet. i think we all need to step back and appreciate the blessings that we have even when we question them or are unsure. my only criticism recurring in your work is that your punctuation is distracting. you don't need to use so many !!!!!! or ?????? one will usually suffice, maybe two to get a point across. otherwise- your messages are incredibly positive and your outlook on life is so refreshing. great work!

[CBH]

I am Catholic, so I love this poem!!!!! And God!!!!!!!!!!!! How did you get the colored words?

[Veronica Chandler]

A very relevant piece which asks some questions we would all like the answers to, for it seems the world is difficult to understand. You have poured your heart and soul into this piece and reading it evokes strong emotions for me.
Very well written!

[emmajoy]

This is a wonderful poem, truly! Tis well written, is refined, and asks so many relevant questions amongst an obviously strong belief.

Your final lines are beautiful because they're sincere .. and consequently, have really touched my heart:

' To conclude this, I'd say, that,
o God, we human beings really adore you,
urge you to take care, wish you a calm goodbye,
and heartly wish, that, may your glory always, gleam
in heaven...!! thannking you, yours lovingly daughter and friend, saumya '

[Saumya]

thank you sooooooooooooooo very much dear..!!!!

[emmajoy]

I did rate it, knew i had, see above my typing ..

[Saumya]

alright..!!!! thank you once again dear..!!!

[Aethereal]

A pleasing mystical dialogue here! The act of assuming that there's an eternal personality within the heart of Reality who cares for us goes a long way at encouraging us to care for each other. What's important is that we make assumptions that help us care for each other. We have no way of knowing if our assumptions are true or not, but if they help us survive, then why not make the one's that help us survive? We're never sure about what we know, but we are sure about how we feel. I would not take a doll away from a little girl if it made her sad to lose her imaginary friend. Some things that we imagine could be true. Imagine what you need to imagine to feel good. We are the content of our mentality.

[Saumya]

thank you for the review..!!!

[Aethereal]

Thank you, Saumya for sharing your mystical poem with me!

[Saumya]

oh..!! thats alright..!!

[David Lewis Paget]

Your questions have been asked for eternity, but strangely, never answered. Perhaps this is because he gave us free will, to live as we desired. We then only learn by our mistakes, not by the intervention of a supreme being. The moment he intervenes, free will goes out the door. What would you rather...

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful poem with good questions. I tell the young people. Karma will bite you in the butt if you don't pay attention. We need to ensure woman and children are safe. Old folks have what they need. Love bring love. Kindness bring kindness. I believe adults must set the example. Thank you for sharing the hopeful and beautiful poem.
Coyote

[Saumya]

thank you sir for the kind review..!!!

[AdorableDreams]

This one was heavenly:)

[Saumya]

thank you!!

[AdorableDreams]

Your welcome:)

[Ency Bearis]

A good plea to God and sure He hears your sentiments.... well penned introspection.

[Saumya]

thank you!!

[Ency Bearis]

you're welcome

[Lily Finch]

Yeah ALLAH is great he knows every thing about every person and ALLAH never do wrong with us but it's return of our own deeds so that's why we face these problems
well written

[Saumya]

thank you dear!!