A letter To GOD....

this is a letter to GOD, on behalf of all human beings to show our love and concern for him..and ask some important question regarding the life today

O God, you are the one,
closest to our hearts...!!
our Angel in pain, and
redeemer in life's game;
without whom, living this life, for us,
is in vain..!!

You, are the one,
who knows, everything about us,
therefore, in real,
you only, are our best friend.
The one, who carefully listens to us,
and, puts us away, from, Life's TENSIONS,
by showering, rays of innocence, and diligence..!

O  GOD, my friend,
everyone  changes with the trend;
but you are the one, always with us, like
a great friend..!!

I ask, you answer;
i pray, you cherish;
i am defeated, you console me,
i am hopeless, you give me hope,
i am rejected, you give me the ways,
how my real talents can be showcased..
All of which, that, only a best friend,
and parents,
in this world, do for their children,
and friend..
therefore, you are a fine blend ,of
parents and friends;
whom, these  mere words, can't afford to define,
as,YOU and your powers are immense.....!!!

But, my dear friend, i write this letter to you today,
to ask ,some common questions, which is perturbing
human beings today;
they are the ones, whose answers seems,
uncertain,
so, my friend, i hope, you can surely answer
these, then.....

why are the poor, being rejected, and the
rich upgraded......??????
why are the girls, in our society, physically
defeated, and ill-treated by men......?????
why can't children, care , for their
older parents..???
Why is corruption, in this world
so prevalent..???
Will peace, come to this world  again.??

and most importantly.................

Will the world, really end....!!?

O God, these are some questions, which
make, we humans, disillusioned;
Therefore, answering these for you is really important;
because, we consider you as our dearest friend,
so, i know, you will definitely  calm our curiosity,
by answering these questions..

At last, I'd like to thank you ,my friend,
for, patiently, listening to the pathetic condition '
of we humans,
who are really disturbed, by these dreadful conditions,
and hope, that you will shortly
answer these question..

To conclude this, I'd say, that,
o God, we human beings really adore you,
urge you to take care, wish you a calm goodbye,
and heartly wish, that, may your glory always, gleam
in heaven...!!
     
        thannking you,

yours lovingly daughter and friend,
saumya

Author's Note

i hope you would really love and enjoy, reading this
pleeeeeeeeeeeassssssee do rate and comment..!!

Reviews

[Dana Alsamsam]

this is lovely and sweet. i think we all need to step back and appreciate the blessings that we have even when we question them or are unsure. my only criticism recurring in your work is that your punctuation is distracting. you don't need to use so many !!!!!! or ?????? one will usually suffice, maybe two to get a point across. otherwise- your messages are incredibly positive and your outlook on life is so refreshing. great work!

[Criss ;)]

Yeah, i liked this letter...lol :)
nicely penned, great job have this 200/100 :)

[crazer]

Such a sincere piece, brimming with deep concern, appropriate concern, old questions for we all live in the same world, our painful present bound our ancient past, therefore we must look to the words of our creator for answers.
You believe in God, but what about his only begotten son Jesus-Gods his 'word made flesh
. I hope you are not offended by what I am about to say but you can find answers to all your questions in the King James Bible. Sin entered in to this world over Six Thousand years ago, though Adam and Eve's disobedience to God, and with it death and destruction.
God sent his Son Jesus to this world to pay our sin debt on the cross. If you will turn from your sin and trust him to save you, his shed blood with cleanse you, his resurrection will justify you and the Holy spirit will open your eyes so you can understand his word-the Bible. Your questions will be answered, your soul will be saved and you will be birthed into God's family and have a Heavenly home forever.
Please read the King James Bible, believe it and obey it. "For God so loved the world that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life.' -John 3:16. Yes this world is going to be destroyed, but you do not have to die with it. For God has promised a new Heaven and a new Earth for all who have put their trust in Jesus Christ. Please read Revelation Chapter 21 verse 1. Sincerely crazer

[Caradoc]

I would totally go to church to listen to you talk about God. This is a wonderful piece and I like the way you weave your words. I'd say you got a little extra gift when you were molded.

Be well.

-Caradoc

[Saumya]

oh..thats so sweet of you my dear friend,
i just simply present my thoughts as such in my poems, and it feels really great when you and the others appreciate it...!!!
thank you once again,
your friend,
saumya
:)

[quinfinn]

you should know that i am pagan, but i will defend your right to your faith with all my heart, because it is what you believe. well penned.

[Dr. Wood ?]

you have definitely put your heart and soul into this poem...I am a non believer but that does not mean I think there is no God..for if a person truly believes then their God is real...the line...'some common questions which IS perturbing, should be ARE perturbing..other than that I think you made a great job of this

[Saumya]

thank you soooooo much my dear friend for the lovely review....!!!
and i will soon correct my mistake in the poem,
thank you once again,
saumya

[Akshat♥]

Wow...So nice :)
I really enjoyed this poem :)
I know God loves you :)
God helps everyone and be with everyone :)
I really like the way you use your colors to highlight some important things :)
Keep writing !!

Your friend
Akshat

[Saumya]

thank you so much, for the wonderful review...!!!!
:)

[Akshat♥]

You are welcome dear :)

[Ravyne Hawke]

Nice tribute to God.. I didn't like the color changes in the middle of the poem.. very distracting and again, your punctuation is all over the place, in areas that it doesn't need to be. A little trick.. read your poem aloud and where you get a natural pause is usually where a comma would go.. for instance:

Her house, is red with too many shoes on the porch and her, grass is blue.

If you read that sentence out loud, the only place you pause is "and her grass is blue" so the sentence would read:

Her house is red with too many shoes on the porch, and her grass is blue.

Does that help any?

[Kristin Lee]

A long letter to God with the courage to say a lot of things most people won't say. Yet with the humility to still be grateful for what God's given. I can feel your devotion and your questions all wrapped in one. This is a beautiful and personal letter to God. Well done.

[Saumya]

thank you soooooooooooo much, my dear friend..!! :)
glad that you could relate....!!!

[Rahul]

Very long letter, god would have utilized his much time to read your letter. Wonderful write. font's awesome as well.100/100 :)

[Saumya]

thank you so much..!!! :)

[Prritiy]

i also want answer to those questions :)

nice composition.

best wishes

[Saumya]

thank you dear..!!!
glad u could relate..!!!
:)

[Prritiy]

:)

[Saumya]

:)