MY GRANNY,MY LIFE.....

A real story of intense love between a granny and her granddaughter, and the pain of the granddaughter on losing her....

Once, there were days, I used to play;
Once, there was someone, in whose lap,I used to lay;
Once, I was gifted ,with every great gifts of GOD, that,
one strives for;
Once, I hadn't to fear; because,  someone, very dear to me;
was always with me, to take care;
Once, there were days, I needn't bother,
because I  had someone, sweeter than a brother

Once, there was someone,
who understood, all my emotions;
and she, had an immense perception...
Once, GOD gifted me,his best Angel;
she was no one other, than, :
 "MY GRANDMOTHER"

And, how sweet!! it is, to tell you,
my dear readers and friends...; that :
' if i am here today, its all because of her..,
Even today, I wonder, that what was
in her so stronger; that..:
i never had to explain, and she,
clearly perceived my pain...

To me, she was something, more than a mother;
And, I think, thats why,GOD made her,
my GRANDMOTHER;
I enjoyed with her, the most I could;
To me, she was someone, sweeterthah Kids.....

My day started, seeing her;
and , it ended,  sleeping with her..
I loved  her stories;
and, liked her night rhymes,
for me, with her, these , were..;
"The best times".....!!

Days passed, and she grew older;
Gone were the Cuteness, and seen was Dullness;
Gone were the Chubby cheeks , and seen was the Wrinkled Face of hers;
But something, that was still t he same, was;
The Love, Care, and Concern  for her,
Granddaughter.........!!

Honestly, to tell you;
No one in my life, Loved and Cared for me,
As she could....!!!!

Then, came the day, describing which,
My eyes get  filled with pain;
GOD, almighty ,called her angel, back to heaven;
and I in this confusing world was left, all alone;
NO ONE, to PERCEPT me..;
NO ONE , to SHARE  my feelings with...;
NO ONE, to FEEL the pain of my sufferings; and,
NO ONE , to SLEEP and LISTEN STORIES with;....

O, GOD, almighty, I'd really like to thank you...;
for gifting, such a lovely Angel of yours;
who has taught me a great moral, by her detachment, that:
"BIRTH and DEATH are, two basic truths of human life,
One who has come, has to go, and, GOD too, needs,
good people to be with him....."!!

O my  lovely Granny,  may you be safe,
wherever you are, and if, you can see and hear me,
I'd like to tell you, that:
"I LOVE YOU, I LOVE YOU, and I LOVE YOU".....
and here on this earth, Iam totally, incomplete without you, and;
I really MISS YOU.....!!!!!!!!
 

Reviews

[kublakhan27]

This is an emotional experience for sure...like many that have already read it, I share the same feelings...I'm not sure if I've ever recovered from losing my own grandmother, but like you, I've never felt a sense of total loss...a very sweet and heartfelt write :)

[Travis Gibson (poetic h..]

That was beyond sweet, your love translated thru your words.

[Roopal]

So touching.. made me remember my grandmother. i am calling her early morning tomorrow. you bring out emotions in people. !!! :)

[Nia Hope]

I really love this it hits home for me my mom's grandmother just passed recently. Beautifully written and if this happened recently I'm sorry and can feel your pain

[Vikrantsingh]

Mind Blowing Dear,
Grand Parents are just next to god, they teach you all beautiful things and songs
I remember my granny she's 95+ still very strong and steady.

Loved these lines.

NO ONE, to PERCEPT me..;
NO ONE , to SHARE my feelings with...;
NO ONE, to FEEL the pain of my sufferings; and,
NO ONE , to SLEEP and LISTEN STORIES with;....

Keep writing and sharing :)

Singh :)

[Saumya]

thank you soooooooo much much my dear friend....!!!
really happy that you could relate and much happier you loved it...!!!
means a lot to me...!!!
wish your granny 100 more years of life...!!!
take care....
:)

[Vikrantsingh]

Thanks and You're welcome :)
Singh :)

[Saumya]

:)

[~*~Peace Keeper~*~]

This is really sweet...The good thing to think on is that one day you will be reunited with your loved ones.

Good Job

[Saumya]

thank you dear, for the lovely review,
really glad you liked it..!!!
:)

[~*~Peace Keeper~*~]

You're welcome

[Saumya]

:)

[Renée]

( : What a heart tribute for your Grandma and you know what..she knews how much you love her ( :

[Saumya]

THANK YOU SOOO much my friend, this really means a lot to me...!!!
:)
glad you liked it...!!!
:)

[Renée]

it was a pleasure luv ( :

[smilempsn]

I can't pass any review on this one....
Being a child.. the wonderful thing we have is our parents.. and more than that our GrandParents..
They are the one.. who take us for random walks...who share there life stories... and teach us many aspect of so called LIFE..!!

Well I just loved reading it.. Brought back my memories of my grandparents.... I miss them almost regularly.... :( :)

[Dr. Wood ?]

being a grandparent I have to say WELL DONE

[Saumya]

thank you soooo much.... :)
i really feel blessed by this review of yours....!!!
:)
read morethank you soooo much.... :)
i really feel blessed by this review of yours....!!!
:)
really glad you liked it..!!

[SyberRose]

A very sad touching write ... a nice tribut to your granny...Rose

[Rhea752]

This is a lovely, heart wrenching poem about your grandmother. Amazing write

[Saumya]

thank you sooooooo much...!!!