GOODNESS

GOODNESS

A Poem by Saumya
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WE, the human beings want success in life.we struggle a lot ,and finally there are only a few who attain it..here are some of those facts which can help you achieve those height of goodness

"
If you do good,
You are praised,
If you don't,
then don't be amazed,
because, one day or the other, in the
eyes of others,you'll be raised.

The common question which people
have, is "HOW TO DO GOOD "??
Remember,my dear friends,
"TRUE GOODNESS, MAY BE SOUGHT,CAUGHT,
or THOUGHT, but NEVER BOUGHT"
Goodness is the result of being,
too busy to be successful.

It does not come from what you have,
but rather,what you are..
Goodness is not only, the result of hard work,
but also our attitude towards,
all those whom we meet..

For out in the world, we find,
"GOODNESS and GREATNESS  begins with,
a fellow's will;
It's all in the state of mind..

Always remember,that:
"every test in our life,makes us BITTER  or BETTER;
every problem comes, to MAKE US or BREAK US;
choice is ours here, we are VICTIM or VICTORIOUS.."

You can never change,the obstacles of your life,
nor the defeats you face;
what you can only do,is..
"PROMISE YOURSELF,  TO BECOME THE TYPE OF  PERSON,
YOU AND YOUR HEART really wants you TO BE...and rediscover yourself.

Always keep reminding yourself, that:
"YOU are a QUALITY, not QUANTITY;
YOU are a SOUL, not BODY;
YOU CAN, and YOU WILL,
ONE DAY ...PROVE YOUR GOODNESS".

Lastly, my friends,I'd like to reveal  you a secret, that :
"LIFE'S BATTLES don't always go,
to THE STRONGER or FASTER MAN;
but sooner or later,"THE MAN WHO WINS,
IS THE ONE,WHO THINKS,.."HE CAN"!!

THEREFORE ,"ALWAYS AIM IN DOING THE
BEST OF WHAT YOU CAN" AND;
TRUST ME...
YOU'll REAP BEST HARVESTS OF 'GOODNESS'..


© 2013 Saumya


Author's Note

Saumya
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Hello and welcome to the young adult genre writers group. I selected a work of yours at random to review.
I read your poem about goodness and I have to say that I was struck by one line in particular:

Goodness is the result of being,
too busy to be successful.

I really love this! It has so much meaning to me and I think it summarizes the differences between wanting and doing.

Nice work and keep it up!

Posted 11 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Saumya

11 Years Ago

thank you soooo much...!! :)



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What positive inspiring piece, sweetly penned, and gently presented to the reader, tender and guiding as a mother's loving hand good job crazer.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Saumya

11 Years Ago

oh..thats so sweet of you...!!!
well, thank you for the lovely review...!!
:)
This was wonderful and inspiring. Very nice my friend.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Saumya

11 Years Ago

thank you so much..!!!
Thank you kind poet for your poetic contribution.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Saumya

11 Years Ago

you r highly welcomed..!!
thank you for the review..!!
shivohumsohum

11 Years Ago

weoke wokay
Lovely thoughts indeed Saumya...thank you for posting...Rose

Posted 11 Years Ago


Saumya

11 Years Ago

thank you very much...!! for the lovely review :)
A good motivating poem. It is really a shaped poem.
Keep it up Saumya :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Saumya

11 Years Ago

thank u for the lovely review..!!
Pallavi Chaturvedi

11 Years Ago

You are welcome sweetheart :)
You have expressed such beautiful wisdom in your well written piece. I especially loved the lines,
"You can never change,the obstacles of your life,
nor the defeats you face;"
We can only manage ourselves in relation to the obstacles, and this is a choice. Very well done!


Posted 11 Years Ago


Saumya

11 Years Ago

thank you sooooooooooooooooo much, my dear friend..!!
:)
A good one...:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Saumya

11 Years Ago

thank you....!!!
:)
Sami Khalil

11 Years Ago

My pleasure...:)
Awesome!!! It really shows your spiritualism and passion towards life...Salute your soul!!!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Saumya

11 Years Ago

thank you sooooooooo much dear...!!
:)
Wonderful work! Very uplifting and written with real conviction. There's a youth and energy shining through in this, but it rings with wisdom too.

Tiny thing that I might think about changing though:
Where you have "YOU are a SOUL, not BODY;"

Seems like it should either be "are a SOUL, not a BODY;" orrr "are SOUL, not BODY"
But otherwise, practically flawless :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Saumya

11 Years Ago

thank you soooooooo much for the lovely review..!!!
:)

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