GOODNESS

WE, the human beings want success in life.we struggle a lot ,and finally there are only a few who attain it..here are some of those facts which can help you achieve those height of goodness

If you do good,
You are praised,
If you don't,
then don't be amazed,
because, one day or the other, in the
eyes of others,you'll be raised.

The common question which people
have, is "HOW TO DO GOOD "??
Remember,my dear friends,
"TRUE GOODNESS, MAY BE SOUGHT,CAUGHT,
or THOUGHT, but NEVER BOUGHT"
Goodness is the result of being,
too busy to be successful.

It does not come from what you have,
but rather,what you are..
Goodness is not only, the result of hard work,
but also our attitude towards,
all those whom we meet..

For out in the world, we find,
"GOODNESS and GREATNESS  begins with,
a fellow's will;
It's all in the state of mind..

Always remember,that:
"every test in our life,makes us BITTER  or BETTER;
every problem comes, to MAKE US or BREAK US;
choice is ours here, we are VICTIM or VICTORIOUS.."

You can never change,the obstacles of your life,
nor the defeats you face;
what you can only do,is..
"PROMISE YOURSELF,  TO BECOME THE TYPE OF  PERSON,
YOU AND YOUR HEART really wants you TO BE...and rediscover yourself.

Always keep reminding yourself, that:
"YOU are a QUALITY, not QUANTITY;
YOU are a SOUL, not BODY;
YOU CAN, and YOU WILL,
ONE DAY ...PROVE YOUR GOODNESS".

Lastly, my friends,I'd like to reveal  you a secret, that :
"LIFE'S BATTLES don't always go,
to THE STRONGER or FASTER MAN;
but sooner or later,"THE MAN WHO WINS,
IS THE ONE,WHO THINKS,.."HE CAN"!!

THEREFORE ,"ALWAYS AIM IN DOING THE

BEST OF WHAT YOU CAN" AND;

TRUST ME...

YOU'll REAP BEST HARVESTS OF 'GOODNESS'..

Author's Note

IF YOU FIND THIS WRITING PLEASE DO COMMENT...YOUR OPINIONS ARE HIGHLY WELCOMED

Reviews

[Maria Mercurio]

Hello and welcome to the young adult genre writers group. I selected a work of yours at random to review.
I read your poem about goodness and I have to say that I was struck by one line in particular:

Goodness is the result of being,
too busy to be successful.

I really love this! It has so much meaning to me and I think it summarizes the differences between wanting and doing.

Nice work and keep it up!

[Saumya]

thank you soooo much...!! :)

[Rhea752]

Lots of lessons and very empowering!! Keep writing!! :D

[Saumya]

thank you so much my dear friend, for the grand appreciation...!!! :)
glad that you liked it...!!!
:)

[quinfinn]

some very poignant and worthy lessons in this write. nicely penned!

[Saumya]

thank you sooooooooo much, my dear friend, for the lovely review.....!!!
reallllly happy that you liked it....!!!
take care....
with best wishes,
saumya
:)

[Aethereal]

I think that this poem would work better if it addressed someone within the poem, and contained some rhythm: As an example you may keep this tiny poem about goodness that I was inspire to write by your poem: This tiny poem could be the seed for a larger poem:

Be Good

Bobby be good.
Don't waste your days,
do as you should,
change your bad ways,
stray from the hood,
ditch your mind's haze.
Bobby be good.
.

[Saumya]

really loved your advice...!!!
will soon work on this...!!!
thank you.....

[Dr. Wood ?]

you relaxed more as this went on, I find that sometimes your rhymes can be a little forced but when you don't bother about them you can produce some quite brilliantly simple lines...The message is clear and it is a true message...I live by these words from The Water Babies..Do as you would be done by....

[Saumya]

thank you for the kind review...!!!!

[Baby Ricochet]

Good advice. Thank you

[Saumya]

you are highly welcomed, my friend...!!
:)

[Ravyne Hawke]

I like the general message that this poem conveys, but I feel it is written in a preachy manner. That could be both good or bad, depending on your intent with the poem. I think people will come to "goodness" on their own, if they are seeking it and no matter what others say will encourage someone along faster. I also know that not everyone seeks goodness.. some people just want to be bad. Nice thought provoking poem.

[Saumya]

thank you soooooo much dear, for clearly expressing your views,
i totally agree with your thoughts..!!
thanks alot for the precious review...!!
reallly happy that you liked it...!!!
take care,
with lots of love and best wishes,
your friend,
saumya
:)

[.]

'It does not come from what you have, but rather what you are'. I so agree.

A very inspirational poem my dear friend. Keep writing! :)

[Saumya]

thank you soooooooo much dear....!!
really glad, that you could relate..!!
:)

[.]

You're welcome! :)

[Saumya]

:)

[Kristin Lee]

Reap the harvest of goodness...such an uplifting and inspiring message. I love the overall content and theme. To believe that being good is a choice and it comes not from predetermined thought or destiny but actions is so important. Great job expressing meaning, showing difference between POV and drawing your conclusion.

[Saumya]

thank you sooooooooo much dear....!!!
:)

[Shivam Murari]

Quotation of the day
"It does not come from what you have,
but rather,what you are.."

The meaning comes across very well.
The poem is inspirational and GOOD. :)

[Saumya]

thank you..!!
:)

[Shivam Murari]

:)

[Rita L. Sev]

Inspiring sentiments here. Well done!

[Saumya]

thank you soo much..!!!

[Saumya]

thank you sooooo much..!!