GOODNESS

GOODNESS

A Poem by Saumya
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WE, the human beings want success in life.we struggle a lot ,and finally there are only a few who attain it..here are some of those facts which can help you achieve those height of goodness

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If you do good,
You are praised,
If you don't,
then don't be amazed,
because, one day or the other, in the
eyes of others,you'll be raised.

The common question which people
have, is "HOW TO DO GOOD "??
Remember,my dear friends,
"TRUE GOODNESS, MAY BE SOUGHT,CAUGHT,
or THOUGHT, but NEVER BOUGHT"
Goodness is the result of being,
too busy to be successful.

It does not come from what you have,
but rather,what you are..
Goodness is not only, the result of hard work,
but also our attitude towards,
all those whom we meet..

For out in the world, we find,
"GOODNESS and GREATNESS  begins with,
a fellow's will;
It's all in the state of mind..

Always remember,that:
"every test in our life,makes us BITTER  or BETTER;
every problem comes, to MAKE US or BREAK US;
choice is ours here, we are VICTIM or VICTORIOUS.."

You can never change,the obstacles of your life,
nor the defeats you face;
what you can only do,is..
"PROMISE YOURSELF,  TO BECOME THE TYPE OF  PERSON,
YOU AND YOUR HEART really wants you TO BE...and rediscover yourself.

Always keep reminding yourself, that:
"YOU are a QUALITY, not QUANTITY;
YOU are a SOUL, not BODY;
YOU CAN, and YOU WILL,
ONE DAY ...PROVE YOUR GOODNESS".

Lastly, my friends,I'd like to reveal  you a secret, that :
"LIFE'S BATTLES don't always go,
to THE STRONGER or FASTER MAN;
but sooner or later,"THE MAN WHO WINS,
IS THE ONE,WHO THINKS,.."HE CAN"!!

THEREFORE ,"ALWAYS AIM IN DOING THE
BEST OF WHAT YOU CAN" AND;
TRUST ME...
YOU'll REAP BEST HARVESTS OF 'GOODNESS'..


© 2013 Saumya


Author's Note

Saumya
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Hello and welcome to the young adult genre writers group. I selected a work of yours at random to review.
I read your poem about goodness and I have to say that I was struck by one line in particular:

Goodness is the result of being,
too busy to be successful.

I really love this! It has so much meaning to me and I think it summarizes the differences between wanting and doing.

Nice work and keep it up!

Posted 11 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Saumya

11 Years Ago

thank you soooo much...!! :)



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"TRUE GOODNESS, MAY BE SOUGHT,CAUGHT,
or THOUGHT, but NEVER BOUGHT"
these lines are so true.....can't be thought n can't be brought, but can be achieved by being a good human...
every test in our life,makes us BITTER or BETTER;
every problem comes, to MAKE US or BREAK US;
choice is ours here, we are VICTIM or VICTORIOUS.
great lines..we are responsible for our own situations..everything happens for a good :)

as a whole, its an outstanding poetry that says "its just YOU and nobody else"


Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

so nicely written ... every bit of it had it's meaning beautifully described .... learnt alot from it .. what a piece it is ..!

Posted 11 Years Ago


This is very inspiring! It's also entertaining to read. A job well done!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Its hard to state how was my cooking and then when you taste your own prepare stuff you say " Oh! Am I so great at this?" and you're heart responds back yes you are.
1: You added proper ingredients to this poem with proper amount and adding it with goodness :)
2: You made me read this from start to end - flow was good and with your goodness :)
3: You create goodness with sweet examples here on proper time :)
4: I'm grabbing your poems and sharing it with my friends as it was all on Goodness :)
- Shared with me, I'm pleased - Saumya. Stay blessed :)
Excellence which you have developed while thinking this poem it was all due to goodness :)
- Again suggestion, just add colors to your poem instead using CAPS :P
Rest all is excellent :)
- Singh :)

P.S - Note : Email Etiquettes - if you use CAPS in email/chats it shows you are angry. My perception, as a poet you have freedom to use and try anything to spread love with your friends which you did here properly :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Nice poem, friend i really like it

Posted 11 Years Ago


it's a nice piece i like the way you incorporated another well known motivational poem into it

Posted 11 Years Ago


it's interesting and inspiring... writing....!!!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Love this! I like how this flows. Great job


Posted 11 Years Ago


I agree with Maria about the lines:

Goodness is the result of being,
too busy to be successful.

It's not how much money you make but how many good deeds you have done for others. I do believe, however, that being good can be hard work. Human nature does not always point us in the right direction - we have to work at being good! Thanks for your very thought-provoking poem.



Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is a great poem. It brings out the good in me

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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