WE,
the human beings want success in life.we struggle a lot ,and finally
there are only a few who attain it..here are some of those facts which
can help you achieve those height of goodness
If you do good, You are
praised, If you don't, then don't be
amazed, because, one day or the other, in the eyes of
others,you'll be raised.
The common question which
people have, is "HOW TO DO GOOD "?? Remember,my dear
friends, "TRUE
GOODNESS, MAY BE SOUGHT,CAUGHT, or THOUGHT, but NEVER
BOUGHT" Goodness is the result of
being, too busy to be successful.
It does
not come from what you have, but rather,what you
are.. Goodness is not only, the result of hard
work, but also our attitude towards, all those whom we
meet..
For out in the world, we
find, "GOODNESS and
GREATNESS begins with, a fellow's will; It's
all in the state of mind..
Always
remember,that: "every
test in our life,makes us BITTER or BETTER; every
problem comes, to MAKE US or BREAK US; choice is ours here, we
are VICTIM or VICTORIOUS.."
You can
never change,the obstacles of your life, nor the defeats you
face; what you can only do,is.. "PROMISE
YOURSELF, TO BECOME THE TYPE OF PERSON, YOU
AND YOUR HEART really wants you TO BE...and rediscover
yourself.
Always keep reminding yourself,
that: "YOU are a QUALITY, not QUANTITY; YOU are a
SOUL, not BODY; YOU CAN, and YOU WILL, ONE DAY
...PROVE YOUR GOODNESS".
Lastly, my friends,I'd like
to reveal you a secret, that : "LIFE'S BATTLES don't always
go, to THE STRONGER or FASTER MAN; but sooner or
later,"THE MAN WHO WINS, IS THE ONE,WHO THINKS,.."HE
CAN"!!
Hello and welcome to the young adult genre writers group. I selected a work of yours at random to review.
I read your poem about goodness and I have to say that I was struck by one line in particular:
Goodness is the result of being,
too busy to be successful.
I really love this! It has so much meaning to me and I think it summarizes the differences between wanting and doing.
Saumya,
"GOODNESS" was a reminder to be thankful for any goodness within our beings. Not all people in this world have this mindset. Life for many is just impossible and so awful.
We here in the west are so fortunate and may even be proud of our "goodness"
Your poem was a wake up call for people to think and be responsible for the blessing of the very desire for goodness and to be good.
It is a discipline worth working towards! Beautiful poem!
Bless you much,
Kathy
PS.I like philosophical writing . I wonder what you'd think of mine?I come from a vantage point with God's creation as my vehicle of inspiration.
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Hey, Kathy!😊
Thankyou so much for leaving such deep thoughtful and insightful word.. read moreHey, Kathy!😊
Thankyou so much for leaving such deep thoughtful and insightful words for my piece :) it feels great when people can relate with what I wrote and let me know:) Thankyou for sharing your thoughts in and about this piece.Im very glad that you could relate so well with it:)
Thankyou so much for the blessings:)
((((HUGS))))💗
I'm glad your like philosophhical writings😊you'll find most of my pieces in this same genere.
Since I haven't much gone through your pieces except the first one that I've reviewed, I can't say much about your writings...But yes, that piece of tkyours was incredibly beautiful :) looking forward to reading and reviewing more if your pieces soon.Also, if there are some that you 'd like me to review/read first, feel free to send me an RR fie it, or simply send me a mail :) I'lll read and review it soon :)
"It does not come from what you have,
but rather,what you are..
Goodness is not only, the result of hard work,
but also our attitude towards,
all those whom we meet.."
this stanza really got me, this poem demonstrates the truth behind being happy and successful, when it comes down to it, its all up to the individual: If they think they can accomplish something, then they can
thank you for the write, I really enjoyed it :)
This is a very nice poem, Saumya. I wish that, when I was your age, someone had discouraged me from ever growing old. For it is this type of youthful road-map-cum-sign-posts that should accompany the entirety of ones life. Alas, there is a sad discovery that I believe that I have made... it is this; the testing never ends until the end. We may travel 3 days without bread but only one without water. Don't forget the water. These are my opinions and comments. It is what your writing has inspired me to say and I hope you find the words satisfactory and more of quality than quantity.
Hi all:)
this is me....Saumya
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but yes to start with,
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