GOODNESS

GOODNESS

A Poem by Saumya
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WE, the human beings want success in life.we struggle a lot ,and finally there are only a few who attain it..here are some of those facts which can help you achieve those height of goodness

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If you do good,
You are praised,
If you don't,
then don't be amazed,
because, one day or the other, in the
eyes of others,you'll be raised.

The common question which people
have, is "HOW TO DO GOOD "??
Remember,my dear friends,
"TRUE GOODNESS, MAY BE SOUGHT,CAUGHT,
or THOUGHT, but NEVER BOUGHT"
Goodness is the result of being,
too busy to be successful.

It does not come from what you have,
but rather,what you are..
Goodness is not only, the result of hard work,
but also our attitude towards,
all those whom we meet..

For out in the world, we find,
"GOODNESS and GREATNESS  begins with,
a fellow's will;
It's all in the state of mind..

Always remember,that:
"every test in our life,makes us BITTER  or BETTER;
every problem comes, to MAKE US or BREAK US;
choice is ours here, we are VICTIM or VICTORIOUS.."

You can never change,the obstacles of your life,
nor the defeats you face;
what you can only do,is..
"PROMISE YOURSELF,  TO BECOME THE TYPE OF  PERSON,
YOU AND YOUR HEART really wants you TO BE...and rediscover yourself.

Always keep reminding yourself, that:
"YOU are a QUALITY, not QUANTITY;
YOU are a SOUL, not BODY;
YOU CAN, and YOU WILL,
ONE DAY ...PROVE YOUR GOODNESS".

Lastly, my friends,I'd like to reveal  you a secret, that :
"LIFE'S BATTLES don't always go,
to THE STRONGER or FASTER MAN;
but sooner or later,"THE MAN WHO WINS,
IS THE ONE,WHO THINKS,.."HE CAN"!!

THEREFORE ,"ALWAYS AIM IN DOING THE
BEST OF WHAT YOU CAN" AND;
TRUST ME...
YOU'll REAP BEST HARVESTS OF 'GOODNESS'..


© 2013 Saumya


Author's Note

Saumya
IF YOU FIND THIS WRITING PLEASE DO COMMENT...YOUR OPINIONS ARE HIGHLY WELCOMED

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Hello and welcome to the young adult genre writers group. I selected a work of yours at random to review.
I read your poem about goodness and I have to say that I was struck by one line in particular:

Goodness is the result of being,
too busy to be successful.

I really love this! It has so much meaning to me and I think it summarizes the differences between wanting and doing.

Nice work and keep it up!

Posted 11 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Saumya

11 Years Ago

thank you soooo much...!! :)



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This was very good, I believe each word is true. I was just thinking maybe you could use a few less all capital lines, it kind of tears away from the work. Other than that it was a great piece of writing.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Saumya

11 Years Ago

thank you sooooooooo much for the kind review..!!
:)
An insightful write with such message. Nice one.

Posted 11 Years Ago


The nice thing about online writing is we get to see you without seeing you.
If I am to believe you are young, you are wise for your age, continue to help open the eyes of others.
If I were to believe you older, Than thank you for your teachings, and words of wisdom.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Great wisdom in your words. A person who live with kindness and love as their motivation. Will know happiness and peace. I agree with the thoughts in the poem. Thank you for the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

Posted 11 Years Ago


This got me thinking about an old philosophical question - what's the difference between 'right' and 'good'?
What are the definitions and how do we apply them? Are they purely subjective?

I think it's always a good thing when someone's work encourages you to ask questions like these.
Very inspirational. Keep it up!


Posted 11 Years Ago


Very nice poem and as I told, your writing style amazes me:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


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CBH
Awww, this was really good! The way it was written (or typed, I guess:>) made it sound like it was done by a proffesional! (Not sure if I spelled that right:P) Awesome job!

Posted 11 Years Ago


great sermon!! type and more encouraging one!!! kip it write more!!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Lots of attitude in this one...and a grand message. Like the way your wrapped it up at the end, very uplifting piece...nice.

Posted 11 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Saumya

11 Years Ago

thank you sooooooo much, for the review...!!
:)
Hello and welcome to the young adult genre writers group. I selected a work of yours at random to review.
I read your poem about goodness and I have to say that I was struck by one line in particular:

Goodness is the result of being,
too busy to be successful.

I really love this! It has so much meaning to me and I think it summarizes the differences between wanting and doing.

Nice work and keep it up!

Posted 11 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Saumya

11 Years Ago

thank you soooo much...!! :)

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