WE,
the human beings want success in life.we struggle a lot ,and finally
there are only a few who attain it..here are some of those facts which
can help you achieve those height of goodness
If you do good, You are
praised, If you don't, then don't be
amazed, because, one day or the other, in the eyes of
others,you'll be raised.
The common question which
people have, is "HOW TO DO GOOD "?? Remember,my dear
friends, "TRUE
GOODNESS, MAY BE SOUGHT,CAUGHT, or THOUGHT, but NEVER
BOUGHT" Goodness is the result of
being, too busy to be successful.
It does
not come from what you have, but rather,what you
are.. Goodness is not only, the result of hard
work, but also our attitude towards, all those whom we
meet..
For out in the world, we
find, "GOODNESS and
GREATNESS begins with, a fellow's will; It's
all in the state of mind..
Always
remember,that: "every
test in our life,makes us BITTER or BETTER; every
problem comes, to MAKE US or BREAK US; choice is ours here, we
are VICTIM or VICTORIOUS.."
You can
never change,the obstacles of your life, nor the defeats you
face; what you can only do,is.. "PROMISE
YOURSELF, TO BECOME THE TYPE OF PERSON, YOU
AND YOUR HEART really wants you TO BE...and rediscover
yourself.
Always keep reminding yourself,
that: "YOU are a QUALITY, not QUANTITY; YOU are a
SOUL, not BODY; YOU CAN, and YOU WILL, ONE DAY
...PROVE YOUR GOODNESS".
Lastly, my friends,I'd like
to reveal you a secret, that : "LIFE'S BATTLES don't always
go, to THE STRONGER or FASTER MAN; but sooner or
later,"THE MAN WHO WINS, IS THE ONE,WHO THINKS,.."HE
CAN"!!
Hello and welcome to the young adult genre writers group. I selected a work of yours at random to review.
I read your poem about goodness and I have to say that I was struck by one line in particular:
Goodness is the result of being,
too busy to be successful.
I really love this! It has so much meaning to me and I think it summarizes the differences between wanting and doing.
This was very good, I believe each word is true. I was just thinking maybe you could use a few less all capital lines, it kind of tears away from the work. Other than that it was a great piece of writing.
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
thank you sooooooooo much for the kind review..!!
:)
The nice thing about online writing is we get to see you without seeing you.
If I am to believe you are young, you are wise for your age, continue to help open the eyes of others.
If I were to believe you older, Than thank you for your teachings, and words of wisdom.
Great wisdom in your words. A person who live with kindness and love as their motivation. Will know happiness and peace. I agree with the thoughts in the poem. Thank you for the outstanding poetry.
Coyote
This got me thinking about an old philosophical question - what's the difference between 'right' and 'good'?
What are the definitions and how do we apply them? Are they purely subjective?
I think it's always a good thing when someone's work encourages you to ask questions like these.
Very inspirational. Keep it up!
Awww, this was really good! The way it was written (or typed, I guess:>) made it sound like it was done by a proffesional! (Not sure if I spelled that right:P) Awesome job!
Hello and welcome to the young adult genre writers group. I selected a work of yours at random to review.
I read your poem about goodness and I have to say that I was struck by one line in particular:
Goodness is the result of being,
too busy to be successful.
I really love this! It has so much meaning to me and I think it summarizes the differences between wanting and doing.
Hi all:)
this is me....Saumya
well, i don't have much to tell you all about me..
but yes to start with,
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