GOODNESS

WE, the human beings want success in life.we struggle a lot ,and finally there are only a few who attain it..here are some of those facts which can help you achieve those height of goodness

If you do good,
You are praised,
If you don't,
then don't be amazed,
because, one day or the other, in the
eyes of others,you'll be raised.

The common question which people
have, is "HOW TO DO GOOD "??
Remember,my dear friends,
"TRUE GOODNESS, MAY BE SOUGHT,CAUGHT,
or THOUGHT, but NEVER BOUGHT"
Goodness is the result of being,
too busy to be successful.

It does not come from what you have,
but rather,what you are..
Goodness is not only, the result of hard work,
but also our attitude towards,
all those whom we meet..

For out in the world, we find,
"GOODNESS and GREATNESS  begins with,
a fellow's will;
It's all in the state of mind..

Always remember,that:
"every test in our life,makes us BITTER  or BETTER;
every problem comes, to MAKE US or BREAK US;
choice is ours here, we are VICTIM or VICTORIOUS.."

You can never change,the obstacles of your life,
nor the defeats you face;
what you can only do,is..
"PROMISE YOURSELF,  TO BECOME THE TYPE OF  PERSON,
YOU AND YOUR HEART really wants you TO BE...and rediscover yourself.

Always keep reminding yourself, that:
"YOU are a QUALITY, not QUANTITY;
YOU are a SOUL, not BODY;
YOU CAN, and YOU WILL,
ONE DAY ...PROVE YOUR GOODNESS".

Lastly, my friends,I'd like to reveal  you a secret, that :
"LIFE'S BATTLES don't always go,
to THE STRONGER or FASTER MAN;
but sooner or later,"THE MAN WHO WINS,
IS THE ONE,WHO THINKS,.."HE CAN"!!

THEREFORE ,"ALWAYS AIM IN DOING THE

BEST OF WHAT YOU CAN" AND;

TRUST ME...

YOU'll REAP BEST HARVESTS OF 'GOODNESS'..

Author's Note

IF YOU FIND THIS WRITING PLEASE DO COMMENT...YOUR OPINIONS ARE HIGHLY WELCOMED

Reviews

[Maria Mercurio]

Hello and welcome to the young adult genre writers group. I selected a work of yours at random to review.
I read your poem about goodness and I have to say that I was struck by one line in particular:

Goodness is the result of being,
too busy to be successful.

I really love this! It has so much meaning to me and I think it summarizes the differences between wanting and doing.

Nice work and keep it up!

[Saumya]

thank you soooo much...!! :)

[smilempsn]

So much inspiration under one title.. :)

[Onku Ghosh]

lots of lessons to be learnt from your poem. good writing!! keep it up.

[Astro]

There are some interesting perspectives in this piece. The thoughts flow from one to the next but a few of the lines are a little choppy, in their reading due to missing words to expressions. One example is, "Lastly, my friends,I'd like to reveal you a secret, that :" after 'reveal' you should add the word 'to' because it is not 'a you' that you are revealing but 'to you' also, the ':' at the end of the sentence is unnecessary and usually stands for a break before a list or, series of facts where your thoughts are simply a continuation of what you are about to reveal.

[Jon Roggie]

Process of life. One can only try to grow from the events we experience. Well done.

[Roopal]

so inspiring !!!! i loved the line "TRUE GOODNESS, MAY BE SOUGHT,CAUGHT,
or THOUGHT, but NEVER BOUGHT". money can not buy our goodness.. so true !!! :)

[emmajoy]

What an amazingly mature writer you are, you're a wise young lady and there are many grown-ups who'd do well to take notice of what you write, and the way in which you write. Thank you so much for sharing..

'"TRUE GOODNESS, MAY BE SOUGHT,CAUGHT, ~ or THOUGHT, but NEVER BOUGHT"~ Goodness is the result of being, too busy to be successful.'

[Phantom Heart]

"Goodness is the result of being" Not that I do not have a lot of faith in humanity, but writers prove that there are people out there that see life for what it is. Writers, I think have this gift. I couldn't agree with you more. I recently came into a tee shirt making business and I read this article about making your own business work, and the people that make it are persistent and they are the ones that think they can! I like your poem! :)

[Nia Hope]

Really good message but I wouldn't capitalize so many words because it was a bit distracting from the overall message. Only a suggestion but still a great write

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Classy mature and empowering thoughts...

perfect :)

[Criss ;)]

First stanza and the last one was greatly penned and i liked both one's, have this 100/100:)

[Saumya]

thank you sooooooooooooooooooo much my dear friend, feeling really happy to have such great review...!!!
realllllllllllly happy for the great rating..!!!1
a big thanks once again,
take care....
with best wishes,
saumya
:)