GOODNESS

WE, the human beings want success in life.we struggle a lot ,and finally there are only a few who attain it..here are some of those facts which can help you achieve those height of goodness

If you do good,
You are praised,
If you don't,
then don't be amazed,
because, one day or the other, in the
eyes of others,you'll be raised.

The common question which people
have, is "HOW TO DO GOOD "??
Remember,my dear friends,
"TRUE GOODNESS, MAY BE SOUGHT,CAUGHT,
or THOUGHT, but NEVER BOUGHT"
Goodness is the result of being,
too busy to be successful.

It does not come from what you have,
but rather,what you are..
Goodness is not only, the result of hard work,
but also our attitude towards,
all those whom we meet..

For out in the world, we find,
"GOODNESS and GREATNESS  begins with,
a fellow's will;
It's all in the state of mind..

Always remember,that:
"every test in our life,makes us BITTER  or BETTER;
every problem comes, to MAKE US or BREAK US;
choice is ours here, we are VICTIM or VICTORIOUS.."

You can never change,the obstacles of your life,
nor the defeats you face;
what you can only do,is..
"PROMISE YOURSELF,  TO BECOME THE TYPE OF  PERSON,
YOU AND YOUR HEART really wants you TO BE...and rediscover yourself.

Always keep reminding yourself, that:
"YOU are a QUALITY, not QUANTITY;
YOU are a SOUL, not BODY;
YOU CAN, and YOU WILL,
ONE DAY ...PROVE YOUR GOODNESS".

Lastly, my friends,I'd like to reveal  you a secret, that :
"LIFE'S BATTLES don't always go,
to THE STRONGER or FASTER MAN;
but sooner or later,"THE MAN WHO WINS,
IS THE ONE,WHO THINKS,.."HE CAN"!!

THEREFORE ,"ALWAYS AIM IN DOING THE

BEST OF WHAT YOU CAN" AND;

TRUST ME...

YOU'll REAP BEST HARVESTS OF 'GOODNESS'..

Author's Note

IF YOU FIND THIS WRITING PLEASE DO COMMENT...YOUR OPINIONS ARE HIGHLY WELCOMED

Reviews

[Maria Mercurio]

Hello and welcome to the young adult genre writers group. I selected a work of yours at random to review.
I read your poem about goodness and I have to say that I was struck by one line in particular:

Goodness is the result of being,
too busy to be successful.

I really love this! It has so much meaning to me and I think it summarizes the differences between wanting and doing.

Nice work and keep it up!

[Saumya]

thank you soooo much...!! :)

[Lee Foreman]

This was great!! In every obstacle I face, I find that it makes my muscles stronger because I have went through it and gained the lesson behind it.

[Angel]

You remind me of something the Wizard said to the Tin Man when he asked him for a heart.
"A heart isn't so much about how much you love...but how much you are loved."
If you spend a lot of time worrying about how much other people love you, they probably won't. But if you love them, you won't have to worry about it at all...because everyone loves to be loved...

[Prritiy]

It does not come from what you have,
but rather,what you are..
Goodness is not only, the result of hard work,
but also our attitude towards,
all those whom we meet..


thoughtful and thought provoking write, liked it :)

[Patrick O'Neil]

Love it " "LIFE'S BATTLES don't always go,
to THE STRONGER or FASTER MAN;
but sooner or later,"THE MAN WHO WINS,
IS THE ONE,WHO THINKS,.."HE CAN"!! "

Makes e want to be that man, that can!. Great write

[Darkblushedink]

"Goodness is the result of being,
too busy to be successful."
love this line......it's totally different from what i would expect to read! I guess that leaves its mark on ones mind! :)

every test in our life,makes us BITTER or BETTER;
every problem comes, to MAKE US or BREAK US;
choice is ours here, we are VICTIM or VICTORIOUS.."

this line reminds me of a quote "Nobody can make you feel inferior without your consent!" i love this stanza because of that! Your words are simple pure and universal Saumya which makes your poem quite reflective and pretty!

"LIFE'S BATTLES don't always go,
to THE STRONGER or FASTER MAN;
but sooner or later,"THE MAN WHO WINS,
IS THE ONE,WHO THINKS,.."HE CAN"!!

THEREFORE ,"ALWAYS AIM IN DOING THE
BEST OF WHAT YOU CAN" AND;
TRUST ME...
YOU'll REAP BEST HARVESTS OF 'GOODNESS'..

I love this line for it wraps up the entire poem, though in the poem there lacks strong imagery but that is true brilliancy that you brought brave meaning into a poem without the important aid of imagination! That shows that your style can be a very brave and bold and still pure style! :) KEEP UP!!!!

[Leslie Philibert]

To avoid writing mulitiple reviews my thoughts about this writer, after having looked at her work through the RR. A writer with a high moral standard who transports her thoughts with well written lines and well structured poetry, anothetr good example of the high standard of Indian writing, technically often in better English than some European young poets, so my congratulations from here

[AdorableDreams]

I really, really love it. Very good.

[She With Eyes Like Unsh..]

Great job! You are a great writer!

[Caradoc]

This is really inspirational and makes a lot of sense. Thanks for sharing.

-Caradoc

[kublakhan27]

Some wonderful wordplay in this one, and a great message...nicely done :)