WHEN I'LL BID ADIEU

feelings of a student about saying goodbye to the school where she had studied for 14 years!!!!!!

  When one day passes,
The other comes,
Everything changes,
Leaving some,
The 'LOVE', the 'CARE', the 'concern' and
'JOY', that I have received here, was a great fun.

Now has the day come to bid Adieu,
To these wonderful feelings I received.
When I remember, those days so sweet,
When I was a kid of four or five!!
My school taught me, the "ART OF LIFE"..

The way to 'sit', the way to 'stand', the way to
'take', the way to 'understand'
All of this, which were first to me unknown,
My teachers and parents made to me known.

Now, today, after days long back,
When i sit and remember those lovely days,
I can deeply feel the love, care and concern,

Besides those scoldings those days.
I also remember those, swings so sweet,
The lovely flowers, and rhymes so sweet,
like 'TWINKLE-TWINKLE' and 'CHUBBY CHEEKS' .

Time has passed, and I have grown,
No more swings, and no more rhymes,
but its not that, that there's no fun.
When today,I look at the children so cute,
Of three, or four, or five of age:
I can perceive the ART OF LIFE;
It's nothing great, but only this,
"WHEN YOU LIVE, DAY TO DAY;
LIVE TO GIVE, because , the MORE YOU
GIVE, THE MORE YOU LIVE !!!

MY teachers also taught me a wonderful thing;
about success; that,
"DO ANYTHING; but with THE WILL TO WIN".

I hope what i want to say is--
"WHEN YOU LIVE DAY TO DAY ;
Don't live by what people, remark or say;
"BUT, LIVE BY WHAT YOU KNOW IS
TRUE."

Finally to conclude, I'd only say;
"O my lovely school, and wonderful
Teachers,
When I'll adieu ;
I'll really, really, really,
MISS YOU!!!!!!!!

Author's Note

please do comment if you think it was worth reading........i hope you'll love it

Reviews

[Chloe]

Awww.............. very cute, but it made me sad! I loved this poem! *tear* I think my friend may be feeling the same way. She had to leave our school system because her family had to move, and she mooovvvveeeedddd reeeaaaaaallllllyyyyyy fffffaaaaaarrrr aaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaayyyyyy. But, she'll be going back to our school next year, so YAY! One question... Is the poem about you, or somebody else?

[Talal Hussain]

That is such a cute and wonderful write...loved it :-)

[KAin]

A sweet poem, full of both sorrow and inspiration. Feels like someone let their memories just spill onto the page (so to speak). Keep it up!

[Coyote Poetry]

A very good poem. These are the poems you will love most in old age. Memories of friends and school. I like the positive description and hope in the words. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Shane Mohamed]

I love the optimism. Try reading some of Langston Huges's works. He was an amazing poet. Also, Keats, if you're into admiration of beauty.

[CBH]

What grade are you in? I imagine you being in 8th, like me, but I probably sound really stalkerish right now, so.......

This poem is great, and can relate to anyone and everyone, including me. Keep writing!

[Pink Witch]

It gave me the feelings that it happened in real life to you or some other person you know. Very sweet :) You write like you talk, expressing random thoughts. That's a good and a different one. Nice writing style.
If you fine tune it to give more of poem attributes. It will be a very great piece.