WHEN I'LL BID ADIEU

feelings of a student about saying goodbye to the school where she had studied for 14 years!!!!!!

  When one day passes,
The other comes,
Everything changes,
Leaving some,
The 'LOVE', the 'CARE', the 'concern' and
'JOY', that I have received here, was a great fun.

Now has the day come to bid Adieu,
To these wonderful feelings I received.
When I remember, those days so sweet,
When I was a kid of four or five!!
My school taught me, the "ART OF LIFE"..

The way to 'sit', the way to 'stand', the way to
'take', the way to 'understand'
All of this, which were first to me unknown,
My teachers and parents made to me known.

Now, today, after days long back,
When i sit and remember those lovely days,
I can deeply feel the love, care and concern,

Besides those scoldings those days.
I also remember those, swings so sweet,
The lovely flowers, and rhymes so sweet,
like 'TWINKLE-TWINKLE' and 'CHUBBY CHEEKS' .

Time has passed, and I have grown,
No more swings, and no more rhymes,
but its not that, that there's no fun.
When today,I look at the children so cute,
Of three, or four, or five of age:
I can perceive the ART OF LIFE;
It's nothing great, but only this,
"WHEN YOU LIVE, DAY TO DAY;
LIVE TO GIVE, because , the MORE YOU
GIVE, THE MORE YOU LIVE !!!

MY teachers also taught me a wonderful thing;
about success; that,
"DO ANYTHING; but with THE WILL TO WIN".

I hope what i want to say is--
"WHEN YOU LIVE DAY TO DAY ;
Don't live by what people, remark or say;
"BUT, LIVE BY WHAT YOU KNOW IS
TRUE."

Finally to conclude, I'd only say;
"O my lovely school, and wonderful
Teachers,
When I'll adieu ;
I'll really, really, really,
MISS YOU!!!!!!!!

Author's Note

please do comment if you think it was worth reading........i hope you'll love it

Reviews

[Chloe]

Awww.............. very cute, but it made me sad! I loved this poem! *tear* I think my friend may be feeling the same way. She had to leave our school system because her family had to move, and she mooovvvveeeedddd reeeaaaaaallllllyyyyyy fffffaaaaaarrrr aaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaayyyyyy. But, she'll be going back to our school next year, so YAY! One question... Is the poem about you, or somebody else?

[InsanityWriter]

Wow! Leaving a school you've gone to for so long is both exciting and sad. I wish you the best of luck in your future! :D I enjoyed reading this! ^_^

[SteveB]

A lovely tribute to those who are real teachers and not merely those who are employed in education. You brought back some very pleasant memories. Thank you

[Rhea752]

Amazing poem, teachers are very inspiring. I really enjoyed this. Well done!! Keep writing!! :D

[SyberRose]

I still remember all my teachers...and im sure you will too..nice write...Rose:)

[quinfinn]

parting is such sweet sorrow....i wasn't a popular kid in school, so i was glad to get the hell outta there!

[Ravyne Hawke]

I can relate of fond memories from college, but not from grade through high school. It's wonderful that you have such fond memories. Lovely poem.

[Saumya]

thank you sooooooooooo much, my dear friend..!!
:)

[Baby Ricochet]

Saying goodbye is always hard. Nice little poem.

[Kristin Lee]

Very sentimental, as growing up often is. A lot of heart in these words. Peeling back the layers of the years you get a glimpse of what the time there really meant to this person. Very cute.

[MOON]

Lovely write and flow , nostalgic write!