Ocean's Reverie

Swaying, alluring, lovely enticing..

It's rocking back and forth,

calling out to the lonesome wind.

Falling into a deep submission,

cringing from it's only fate.

It is alluringly horrifying;

as well as it is breathtaking.

It can hypnotize your introspection,

with just a beautiful sway.

Dangerous, but lovely;

graceful, but imprudently repulsive.

The waters are Heaven's known liquid.

Flowing from your hands,

into what seems like endless eternity.

You would gaze at the magnificent shore,

and wonder when life takes it's toll.

You can watch the waves' endless twirl;

or wish you can enroll it's curving lull. 

A crash, a ripple will coil your fears;

but not once will it waver to revoke

anything that comes it's way.

Tell me ocean,

won't you sweep me off my feet?

I've been falling for it too far too soon,

to see the what murks between the surface.

The drop of water rests on my hand,

but an ocean awaits it's return to motherland.

I've perished into my futile thoughts,

thinking of past, present, and future's haunt.

I don't think I'll ever;

make it though this dazzling reverie..

Author's Note

A thought that kept bugging my mind, thoughts are welcomed! :)

Reviews

[CagedBIRDsings]

I loved it, another poem well done Twinkle :)
I live near the ocean myself and I think you captured it perfectly on a page.
"Dangerous, but lovely;
graceful, but imprudently repulsive.
The waters are Heaven's known liquid.
Flowing from your hands,
into what seems like endless eternity."
Beautiful, I am definately shelving this one. Thank You

[TheUnforgivinFallenAnge..]

I like

[Lily Mae]

This is a great write. I love the feel of magic with the ocean and mystery of the water.. :) x

[Zack Burton]

That's awesome. A great imagery poem, and with smooth symbolism too. Keep up the good work.