Ocean's Reverie

Swaying, alluring, lovely enticing..

It's rocking back and forth,

calling out to the lonesome wind.

Falling into a deep submission,

cringing from it's only fate.

It is alluringly horrifying;

as well as it is breathtaking.

It can hypnotize your introspection,

with just a beautiful sway.

Dangerous, but lovely;

graceful, but imprudently repulsive.

The waters are Heaven's known liquid.

Flowing from your hands,

into what seems like endless eternity.

You would gaze at the magnificent shore,

and wonder when life takes it's toll.

You can watch the waves' endless twirl;

or wish you can enroll it's curving lull. 

A crash, a ripple will coil your fears;

but not once will it waver to revoke

anything that comes it's way.

Tell me ocean,

won't you sweep me off my feet?

I've been falling for it too far too soon,

to see the what murks between the surface.

The drop of water rests on my hand,

but an ocean awaits it's return to motherland.

I've perished into my futile thoughts,

thinking of past, present, and future's haunt.

I don't think I'll ever;

make it though this dazzling reverie..

Author's Note

A thought that kept bugging my mind, thoughts are welcomed! :)

Reviews

[CagedBIRDsings]

I loved it, another poem well done Twinkle :)
I live near the ocean myself and I think you captured it perfectly on a page.
"Dangerous, but lovely;
graceful, but imprudently repulsive.
The waters are Heaven's known liquid.
Flowing from your hands,
into what seems like endless eternity."
Beautiful, I am definately shelving this one. Thank You

[Mashairi]

i loved reading this :) nice job

[Eile MacIntyre]

OOOh, very entracing. Hypnotizing. Really and truly a great poem.

[Darius]

u made the ocean seem so daring and awesome! it ws really good, great job!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Erinne S.]

I loved this! This was well-written, had beautiful imagery, flowed gracefully, and put my mind at ease. Great job!

~Erinne

[Gone]

Well done. I loved it! You made the ocean sound as a mystery and with beautiful writing

[A.E. Surdam]

Love it. The ocean is another mystery of the earth. No one really knows what lies beneath the waters. Great portrayal of the sea.

[Layla J Omorose]

once again another well written and thought out poem.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A tilted perception, fantastic wording, well done

[Eli]

By living near the ocean I can say that I definitely relate to this poem :) Nicely written, fun to read!