Dreams

   Still dreaming, I am. 

Still in the dawn of the sun, looking over the horizon,

   Always at the rim, ready to tumble down.

For someone to come, and catch you while you drop..

   Tell the clouds to send kisses, and by night, it will rain. 

Tell the sun to shine, and by morning it will light.

   Like a match in a forest, it spreads without notice, 

but in the clear of day, it will spring into desire.

   Desire to love, hold, and be.

Broken hearts resemble pieces of mirrored glass.

   Once made in a smooth, and glorifying beauty;

then fragile, and tempting sins, will bring it's last.

   Make it snow, so the heavens can send kisses.

Let the wind blow, and revive the messages.

   The love letters, written by the heart;

turn into wicked words, that ruin our thoughts.

   The magic that skips around, and makes a song.

A sad love story, and a tragic once beloved.

   Chapters of dark scribbles, and unknown words.

Starts off with pink lovely hearts,

   but ends with knives that lock apart. 

Look at the stars, they will tell you.

   Of the hopeful boy and girl,

who believed in fantasies..

Author's Note

Hope you liked it!

Reviews

[mi-chan]

this was really beautiful! i loved the flow and descriptions, especially:

"Tell the clouds to send kisses, and by night, it will rain.
Tell the sun to shine, and by morning it will light.
Like a match in a forest, it spreads without notice,
but in the clear of day, it will spring into desire.
Desire to love, hold, and be."

Really well done =)

[Erinne S.]

I loved the flow and grace to this piece. It was beautifully written and the descriptions were excellent. It kept my attention throughout and I enjoyed every line.
Well done!

~Erinne

[A.E. Surdam]

Wow, oh, wow, this was just beautiful. I just so love dreams, they can be peaceful at times, and so scary another. They also allow to peak into your future to see the one who will be yours. Ooooh, I hope I dream nice ones tonight!

[raindroplove]

i liked it

[Zack Burton]

This flows extremely well. The visual arrangement of it + the careful wording = goodness.

[Lily Mae]

This has a magical beauty to it.. I simply love the birth and rebirth..and the belief at the end in the fantasies:) x

This is so real & moving.

[Fabric Pulse]

Intensely real and dangerous.

[Peter Joseph Swanson]

Beautiful, and moving!

[CagedBIRDsings]

So may emotions run through the words. I find it so irresistibly beautiful . I LOVED this one. Excellant Job Twinkle, :). I am definately shelving this one.