Swift Descent

In cascading
tresses, when moon
got stuck.

I held your face
to see the frightened
fish in eyes.

Seven feet deep,
the snow-
escapes the man's foot.

A terrible fight
still goes on
between temple and mosque.

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i like the religious references and how they are used...
and if the moon gets stuck we are in trouble...
with all the hate in the world and so much violence done in the name of God.
what the heck are we doing?
soon we will all sleep with the fishes...
j.