Crossing The Road
A Poem by Satish Verma
You flock to a set trap.
A bubble.
You flock to a set trap. A bubble. Midnight: with pain and anger, when a real and virtual drama unfolds. Mercy waits. Meditating: still like a Buddha, a moon was watching you. Watching you, a moon, like a Buddha: still, meditating. Innocence versus ignorance. A mob impaled on the doorstep of future, unsure, but agitated. Life demands a full beheading.
© 2017 Satish Verma
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not sure if you've read their work or not (considering i just discovered them) but this reads like an angry buddha guy poem. (they're pretty good go check them out haha). anyway, i loved this poem, especially the two middle stanzas and how they were basically the same thing but switched around. i thought it was a very exciting thing to do, like a classic writing. this is a very real piece of writing. i highly enjoyed it and i think others will too. :)
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