Not the One

Day after day,

Night after night.

Thoughts of you

are weighing on my mind.

 

I try to think

of something else.

But a lonely feeling

begins flowing through myself.

 

I begin to feel weak,

and then a little pain.

Here lately I'm just not me,

I'm going insane.

 

I gave and gave.

til' I had nothing more to give.

You left me here with nothing,

alone, by myself I sit.

 

So now I think it's time

for me to try and  move on,

how can this hurt so badly

if they say you're not the one?

 

 

Author's Note

when someone you care deeply about, decides they just want to be friends, you feel like everything is falling apart. But you can't put yourself through depression forever, eventually you have to learn how to deal and move on.

Reviews

[Jason]

I can relate with this one...oh boy can i!

great job!

Jason

[darkgurl]

Now this is just wonderful, I like this very well written, of telling it is how it is, wonderfully written.

[WordMaster]

Your poem tells us about your state of mind...
Nicely written

Now, keep writing, each day WILL get a little better