Year 2015

I just tried to describe year 2015...the way I experienced...

Year 2015 !!

you were the year of immense sorrow,

you were the year of grief...

you surpass 2007..you surpass death..

you are successful in tearing me into pieces..

you made me struggle, still pretending to be complete..

but you dared ?? you dared me ?? 

As I am anonymous now .

 I am legion 

I do not forget ..

Never did I forgive ...

you behave cowardice, you hit backside..

and you forget who am I.

Lets pass the time..and then we decide..

who ruined whom and who enjoyed..

year 2015...you take my life..

year 2015..you made me cry..

Author's Note

tried to explain the year..

Reviews

[Valentine]

Mine was 2013. All fell apart when I lost my husband. Valentine

[sarik]

Valentine, you are a great lady.. I believe in you..

[sinNsincerity]

2007 was such an insane year wasn't it..?

[sarik]

yeah, it was.. Sin

[Bear]

Critique: (Lets pass the time) Let's -- Lets is the third person singular form of the verb let, it means to allow or not prevent. Let’s is a contraction of let us.

Review: I like your concept and the challenges each year placed before you. I just wish you would have explained in more detail why those years, you know the whole story but we only have what you tell us. After reading this I couldn't help but wonder what happened in 2015 that caused your sadness and if someone did die in 2007? If this were a story you have me wanting to know more so I would come back to read more. Now you are in my mind so I will have mark your page and read more of your work. Clap! Clap! Clap! Clap!

[sarik]

well, I haven't gone that much far with grammar, may be mistaken.., here this is to allow.. critique accepted..

I am very much okay with your reviews, this is a poem, simply.. I am sorry I don't want to speak more..

bdw I am honored you commented.. I genuinely Thanks you. this is something to be praised Madam..

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[Bear]

I understand how hard it is to write in a second language and English has to be the hardest there is with so many words having more than one meaning, plus all the slang we use now. I compliment you on your bravery for doing so. I apologise for not understanding that this was a self-expression piece and the topic was close to the heart. I often use poetry to help me deal with things in my life, I lack the courage to share them or maybe I am just selfish and want to keep that part of me to myself. I hope you continue to post more of your work and add me to your read request list. Your poetry friend Bear :~) Oh let me give you a link to the best writing tool I have found, it will help with grammar, spelling and punctuation https://app.grammarly.com/ good luck, good day and good writing.

[sarik]

You are good, very much.. I'll do..

[FaeryQueen]

looooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooove iiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiit

[sarik]

oow !! that's so sweet of you Hazra..

Thank You very much for reviewing it :):)

[gentlekindness]

Writing can be very therapeutic. It is good that you write about your feelings. I hope you are able to sit with your pain and the cause of your pain, and comfort that inner child that was wounded.

The greatest pain people can inflict upon us, is that which opens old wounds from long ago. The old wounds must be attended to and healed, before the recent wounds can heal.
Blessings,
Annie

[sarik]

Thank You very Much gentlekindness..and I dont know how it happen, but whenever I am in great grief..I just write it down..
this is the only thing I know..

[gentlekindness]

That is good for you. Better than holding it inside.

[sarik]

okay,

ThanQ Again...

[zaisham9393]

I hope 2016 will be a better year for everyone and full of happiness my friend:)!!

[sarik]

oow, that's so sweet of You zaisham....and ThanK You...

[-inactive now-]

Best way to express such emotions is to write them down, and you did that and made a great poem out of it.
Just one thing: on line five, I think you must have meant 'tearing' instead of 'torning'. That makes more sense.

[sarik]

oow, that's so true Sir...

and sorry for the error..let me rectify it...

[-inactive now-]

;) no worries

[sarik]

Done Robb,

And thanks a lot for viewing it...

really appreciated man...

[-inactive now-]

You're welcome

[Kashif Khan Sahil]

awesome! it's shows sorrow and Revenge.

[sarik]

Exactly sahil..