Its Good To fall, betrayed

Its Good To fall, betrayed

A Poem by Phoenix
"

For All the people in love A poem

"

I was not a poet

Until I was in love

I was not a thinker

Until I was devastated

And I was not a human being

Until I felt you

It is good to fall

abandoned

ignored

unwanted

and betrayed!


 

© 2012 Phoenix


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very true :) - theres a typo in your first line "i was a not ..."

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Phoenix

12 Years Ago

thanks for the review and making me aware of the error

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Added on December 17, 2012
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Tags: Love, Betrayal, Poet

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Phoenix
Phoenix

Allahabad, Uttar Pradesh, India



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