My Soul

My first Acrostic poem.

                         

                             Cleverly Conscious to

      The mystic that surrOunds us,

  Here I make my Nest

                                            Secured iN the Earth's breast…

                                                 I'm an Independent defender

                                     Of this grEat Mother Earth.

 

Reviews

[andrew mitchell]

Just brilliant, speechless! Can I say awesome!

[Carbon Muse]

Aaah! One, I just came from insights acrostic poem and somehow landed right on yours ;D Two, That is a awesome, awesome variation on acrostic!

What's even better is the fact that you used your name, it's not often that you see a poem personalized ... apart from the authors emotions :D

Great poem!

[Michka]

I love acrostic poems, and this is one is very good.

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Beautifully broken my heart. Such a pleasure reading those beautiful lines. Great piece of art!!!

[Insight "MH"]

Aren't we all made of thee! Lovely piece, and thank you for sharing.

Insight.

[Bear]

Being part Blackfoot Indian, any thing that gives praise to Mother Earth is almost holy script. The fact that you link it to your soul shows wisdom for we come from the Mother and return to her. Every soul is a life line linking us back to her, some laugh at the idea, but mother Earth is the only God or Goddess everyone can see, touch and know that without her we would not exist. Sorry for the rant, but then again it was inspired by the light shining from your poetry bound soul :~)

[Adam Adams]

Well, this's certainly a very good loaf of Acrostic poetry indeed. Liked the compositions.. even the functioning of your "Name" -- looking more gorgeous with that radiant clarity of thoughts. Very nice shot.

[Chirag Kumar]

A clever piece. Beautiful :)

[-Scribe in Style-]

Very nicely weaved together with the acrostic name standing out

[Jane P.]

Cool spin on the old acrostic poem style! Love the subtlety of your poetic devices - they weave into the poem very easily and naturally.

Really sweet and soft pace with a lovely meaning. The simplicity actually makes the meaning very clear - awesome stuff.

Great work, I really enjoy your poetry!