Green Couch

Written in a half sleeping trance at about 4 in the morning, you should see the page it's written on,you're lucky i was able to read it in the morning! I tried to edit it, and make it fit, but I felt it lost something when I forced a structure on it.

 I sat stoned on your emerald couch, 
And danced with the notes of your grace. 

I had never heard your voice, 
And found myself lying on your landing floor, 
As you sat, slouched, broken hearted, 
In the empty room below. 
On top of a quiet stereo, 
In a whispering wail to a lost love, 
And lulled my eyelids to sleep.

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[RAWR!]

"I sat stoned on your emerald couch,"
brilliant.

keep on writing.
and thank you for sharing.

[Jessica{is inspired by ..]

Hmmm...I don't quiteunderstand it, it's probably one of those things that you have to be there things. It's calming. You can tell you either wanted to sleep or wanted us to sleep, not that it's boring just calming.

Good job

Jessica