Livin The Dream

Diamonds and gold.
Oh how I love to hold,
Those empowering riches inside my palm.
Money and clothes,
I love those the most.
The only things that can
Really keep me calm.
Fame and glory.
Nothing more to my story.
Just a big city girl living in a big city world.
With my girls all day and the clubs all night.
Nothin' but thrills forever in my sight.
I'm livin the dream. Envy, all I ever see.
If I were you I'd also wish to be me.

            ;)

Reviews

[David Burke]

This made me smile lol well done :)

[Sarah Lynn]

Thank you !!:)

[David Burke]

You're welcome :) btw I plan to make my return to writing soon lol

[Wórdsmíth]

Loving oneself`s worthy than anything else. More we love ourselves, more the world finds "more drops" of love inside us. You`ve written a true piece of your delicious heart. Indeed. Keep loving & writing as well.

[Sarah Lynn]

Thank you !

[Amber Lily]

"If I were you I'd also wish to be me." Those are some strong confident words! I love this because for once I'm reading a poem about someone who is loving life rather than questioning or hating it. Also I thought the color on the words 'gold' and 'money' was a nice touch, adds diversity and intensity to the words.
Well done! :)

[Sarah Lynn]

Thank you ! I agree about the poems always being sad and depressing. Its fun writing things like this sometimes!