Did You Ever Even Care

Did You Ever Even Care

A Poem by Sarah Lynn

Does it ever mean something to you?
Or is it just like any other day?
A lion in the wilderness, just seeking out its prey.
Do you have any feelings? Even just one?
Had it always been this way?
Since the day me and you had begun?
Was I just that blind? That I couldn't even see?
See the monster standing in front of me.
A monster with touches and kisses so kind.
A monster who seduced me,now,wanting him to be mine.
A monster so blind that he doesn't even see.
A girl sits here in love with him, and that girl is me.
It doesn't matter though,for he doesn't even care.
He has his way with me,then leaves me,as if i were never even there..

© 2014 Sarah Lynn


Author's Note

Sarah Lynn
I haven't been on this site in quite sometime. Trying to get back in the swing of writing. As most of you know once you stop for a while it is quite hard to start back up again. So heres something I wrote. Dont be too harsh guys! lol

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This poem`s much depth of some salted drops of your emotions---the emotions which got dripped down into the pages in disguise of such heartfelt words. Love`s just very unkind and apart from it, we all want it because, that`s all we gotta do it to breathe. Quiet interesting!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Awww Sarah this was very sad, believe me I know that feeling. You did awesome and miss ya very much, just take your time ok:)))))))))))))))) Miles of smilessssssssssssssssss:)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Ladies and Gentlemen, the return of a legend :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Sarah Lynn

10 Years Ago

Lol thank you !:) its hard to get on here now a days!
David Burke

10 Years Ago

You're welcome! :) and I've really missed you lol
This is one interesting write and I truly enjoyed, Thank you for sharing


Posted 10 Years Ago



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Sarah Lynn
Sarah Lynn

Rochester, NY



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