You'll Never Be Good Enough

You'll never be good enough, you're just not that fit

You have crooked teeth and you have a thin upper lip.

You'll never be good enough, you're just not that tall.

You're awkwardness amuses me, it just makes me lawl.

You'll never be good enough, you're just not that pretty. 

You're hair is lifeless, dull, and frizzy.

You'll never be good enough, you don't play any sports.

And for that exact reason , your legs aren't fit enough for shorts.

You'll never be good enough, you don't wear name brand clothes.

You look really dull, your loserness is starting to show.

You'll never be good enough, I mean look at you ... just yuck.

Have fun being ugly darling, I wish you the best of luck ! 

Author's Note

I would like to point out that 1. The word lawl is a slang term sort of for 'lol' some/most of you probably know that and for 2. I do not agree with bullying what so ever, so dont ever make anyone ever feel this way, like they arent good enough or something. We are all equals. Help put a stop to bullying

Reviews

[David Burke]

Very well written kido, very nice as always :P

[Kaylee Olson]

Bullying is never right and nobody should have to put up with it. I loved this one:)

[Sarah Lynn]

Thank you (:

[Kaylee Olson]

Anytime:) my pleasure

[Rita L. Sev]

These are things that others may say, or insults that we tell ourselves. Either way, it makes us feel like less... This is a good reminder that we should build each other up!

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

You copy the actions of bullying well in this poem. It can also be used as a poem of low self esteem. Nice write.

[Abeer until dawn]

This holds a great message, a portrait of our modern daily life and the struggle we feel heading the point of perfection or "the perfect image" in a shallow level!
Thank you for your meaningful lines and beautiful put of words!

[Sarah Lynn]

Thank you so much for the great review !

[Laura Harrison]

it's bullies like the ones you portray in this poem that make the world an awful place, and one of the reasons why I hated high school so much

[Sarah Lynn]

I totally agree, hence why I wrote the authors note to assure people that im against this type of behavior and that its not who I am

[Laura Harrison]

I admit, I did think that you wrote it from your perspective at first about someone you don't like. Apologies :)

[Sarah Lynn]

Absolutely not! I am not a cruel person, but now you know lol

[Caradoc]

It was never the words they said that made me feel this way...no. It was the way they said it, the way they looked at me. It was always what they didn't say.

Honestly, I feel like this more often than not. I wonder though, sometimes; perhaps it isn't that I am not good enough for them, but maybe, just maybe, I'm not good enough for me?

Thought provoking.

-Caradoc