Spun

I'm just a little spun out a bit 

My lips are chapped, I have a twitch 

I'm just a little spun out a bit 

Been up for days, my eyes are wide

Nothing to do, lets go for a ride 

I'm just a little spun out a bit 

Talking a million miles per hour

Water; Every two seconds I take a sip

I'm just a little spun out a bit

I've cleaned my house 

Every crack and crevice

I'm just a little spun out a bit 

Been up for days

I'm starting to trip

I'm just a little spun out a bit

Non stop picking at my skin 

Feels as though it could rip 

I'm just a little spun out a bit 

The worlds going so fast , its all becoming a blur

I'll be coming down soon , this i am sure

I'm just a little spun out a bit

There is no more left ...I think ill just sit ....

Reviews

[Laughing-Bear]

My Dear Writing Friend,
Been there, done that. At this stage in my life I rather watch the snowflakes fall as they are today while I listen to the wolf pack sing across the valley. With a hot cup of tea, my pipe, in this chair before a fire I ponder this muse. Might I have been spun out one to many times? I liked your poem, it made me travel pack in memory time and realize just how good I have it today.

Blessings, Laughing-Bear

[David Burke]

This is awesome :) once again another job well done kido

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Sounds like a high, And coming down off a high. I'm glad them days have left me! I thought I was superman and could get all done nope.

[Sarah Lynn]

Lol yeah i can see why you say that , i sort of based it off of being up for days on meth .. but thats good that those days are behind you now ! Phew! lol

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I never went that far I had limits, Never was a junky or a meth addict. I was hung up on pot and pain pills for years, Wonder I am still alive. Been clean sense 2009 proud of it:) I seen enough to realize and wake up.

[Sarah Lynn]

Im not one either ! lol so dont take this poem as something i do please , and good for you !(:

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Oh I never took that way just being open about myself:)