Your Loss

Don''t fall for it every time ladies

Your words ? All lies 

Just like all of the other guys

You're all the same

I can hear your true self just by the way you say my name

Don't try to fool me, for I've been down this track

My trust ? You'll never have that back 

My love ? You'll never have 

For you're just like the rest of them 

I didn't fall for it this time though

This makes me so glad 

Watch me as i walk away, The girl you could of had.

Reviews

[TL Boehm]

Amen. Sometimes you just have to cut the line. Well done.

[Scott Mou]

Although I cant say that I "Understand", I did like your poem.

My Favorite Line is Watch me as i walk away, The girl you could of had.

Keep Up The Good Work

[passionberry]

My favorite line..dont try to fool me I been down this track! Lol.. I feel ya Sarah I been there they always say I'm different but the actions are always similar I can't stand it good write

[Sarah Lynn]

Thank you ! & I know right !? Men are just the worst lol

[MandaBear]

wonderful job!! Great job Sarah

[Bailie Germs]

I feel the pain in this. very well written

[Sarah Lynn]

Thank you (:

[hmarieee]

I know how you feel. This is a great poem. Keep it up sweetie.
-hannahmarie xo

[Sarah Lynn]

Thank you!(:

[Kaylee Olson]

I know exactly how you feel. Very nice poem!:)

[Sarah Lynn]

Thank you so much(:

[Kaylee Olson]

You are very welcome:)

[genocide]

this is a very good poem this happens all the time in high school

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Very meaningful poem, its easy to get hurt these days, to some guys a woman's heart is just a toy they play with. Its sad but true.
Sure you inspired allot of wemen with this poem.
I love the way it flowed the meaning, emotion and depth to it.
It also rhymes very well.
Great write enjoyed the read :)

[Sarah Lynn]

Thank you so much! (:

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

your most welcome :)

[Anand Sehgal]

Not every guy is a liar. To be a liar, you need to be an artist first :)