The Love We Shared

We were one. 

Spun on love.

Not a care in the world.

We were all each other had.

Us against the world

Me and you.

Forever and ever.

Blinded by love.

No one else mattered. 

Like a drug to one another.

Needing each other to keep on surviving.

Feeling as if we went from surviving to living.

Loving each other so much that it hurt. 

Hating each other so much because we loved each other. 

Our world quickly shattered. 

We are no more. 

This was gods plan all along i suppose.

The end.

Author's Note

Another poem thats not typically my normal writing style, but its good to try new things.

Reviews

[The 12th Enigma]

Really emotional, reminds me of myself.
- i loved it! :-)

[Sarah Lynn]

Thank you so much !(:

[Jordan]

This is a great poem... oneof the best that I have read....

[Sarah Lynn]

Thank you !(:

[David Burke]

You did a great job on this one, you really captured the emotion and thought process in that situation, I know how that can feel and you did a great job describing it :) another beautiful job kido! keep the magic flowing :P

[Sarah Lynn]

Omg ! at first i was like " wow another person that says kido" and then i realized you just changed your picture lol . Thank you for the review though . Im glad you understood it!

[David Burke]

Anytime kido :P and what do you mean lol i'm the only me I know and how do you like the pic btw

[Sarah Lynn]

I didnt really read the name just read the review so i thought it was somebody else haha and better ! I can actually see what you look like now! lol

[David Burke]

IKR!! I like it a lot better too lol makes look awesome lol

[David Burke]

sorry not trying to sound conceited lol I'm really not

[Sarah Lynn]

Lol i didnt think it was conceited , i just got offline was all lol

[David Burke]

I just thought i'd check lol