When The Time Comes

If i ever seen you again, i'm pretty sure my heart would just stop.

The air would grow thicker, making it hard to breathe.

Id be at a loss for words 

Every single memory I have of you would come flowing back into my mind.

For that one moment, when i lay eyes on you again. Time will stand still.

I know it will. 

One look into my eyes and i will be stuck. 

Cant move.

Cant breathe.

Cant even speak. 

Just completely and totally losing all control over myself and will then be stupified pretty much.

Its such a scary thought. 

Why ? 

Because i know our goodbye wasn't our last.. we will meet again. 

Author's Note

Its a little out of my comfort zone again because i like to rhyme , but i had to for this one. Im sure we all have that on person where you fell in love quick, just dove in so quickly. Had amazing times together and so in love but then it all went down hill fairly quickly. And this .. this is how you would feel if you had to see that person again.

Reviews

[Anna Seraphim]

I liked the stream of consciousness. The imagery is powerful.

[TL Boehm]

even though you may be more comfortable with rhyming, this is a powerful piece.

[passionberry]

This is very nice I like poems that rhyme to but I always felt a poet can be way more in def without rhyming manly my poems don't rhyme either😊 it makes a difference

[Kelechi Awoms]

Soft and emotional piece
We will all definitely meet again

[Jeannear]

very beautiful poem :)...

[Sarah Lynn]

Thank you (:

[Rita L. Sev]

It's good to write outside of your comfort zone sometimes. The content here is very good, heartfelt and poignant. Love grabs a piece of our heart, and seeing that one that got away again can, as you so eloquently put it, stupify us.

[David Burke]

This is amazing, that's happened to me on a couple of occasions lol Awesome Job Kido!! :P

[Sarah Lynn]

Thank you !(: I love your reviews lol

[David Burke]

You're welcome :) and thanks lol I always try to tell the truth

[Alexis]

Oh, how I love the way all the words just flow together. I can understand exactly how it feels. Reading your writing has just given me great joy. I hope you will keep on writing.(:

[Sarah Lynn]

Thank you so much!!! (: Of course i will!

[Aaron the Baron]

Yes. This is a scary feeling, and I think you've expressed it quite well

[Sarah Lynn]

Thank you. I thought it was pretty dead on if i do say so myself haha