That Time Of The Month

This anger that is brewing inside 

I feel as though it will never reside

I do not care what you say , I have nothing to hide.

Feeling the blood boil beneath my veins 

The sound of your voice just calling my name.. 

Its making me even more angry

My body's on fire 

My visions coming in red

I'm surprised everyone here is not already dead 

For i feel as though i could kill .

Don't mind me i'm just going to flee and take this nice oval pill

Then i will calm down, my patience has been found

I warn all of you. 

Beware when that time of the month comes around.

Reviews

[MandaBear]

I understand completely! I do have to say though I cry a lot when it comes around. You could tell me the sky is blue and I would cry for no reason at all. Very emotional time. Great poem about what affects women. I feel men have them too they just don't bleed like we do. Again Great Great poem!

[Sarah Lynn]

Thank you so much! And trust me i understand completely i cry at everything as it is and when that time comes im just a wreck ! lol

[MandaBear]

Girl I know! I wish we didn't have to deal with this but Eve just HAD to eat that apple lol

[Sarah Lynn]

Hahahahah right !

[Laughing-Bear]

My Dear Writing Friend,
You made me laugh, and this thought came to my mind. We men seems to have a time of the month as well, we wake up one morning and for no good reason are a A.. Hole! Then in three or four days wee become our normal selves once more.

Blessings, Laughing-Bear

[Sarah Lynn]

Well im glad this made you laugh! lol . Ya know what ? I have noticed that actually. Guys definitely have a jerk week or two for themselves as well

[Frieda P]

Ha must be that time of the month for a few, this is the second poem I've read about damn Aunt Flo....nice rant of a poem Sarah Lynn!

[Sarah Lynn]

Thank you ! Lol

[Eagle Cruagh]

This is an incredibly spontaneous, angry and
volatile expression of emotion...... Very; little
wonder that so few write so little about a
situation of terribly aggravating proportions.
Very well written.
Thank you,
----- Eagle Cruagh

[Sarah Lynn]

Haha thank you so much 1

[David Burke]

Very nice lol you've got a talent for portraying emotions with words

[hmarieee]

Hahaha I love this, it's perfect. Great write!
-hannahmarie xo

[Sarah Lynn]

Thank you so much! lol

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Hahaha i think im the only chick that doesnt really get moody on mine my boyfriend loves that about me haha.
Annoying though aeee, i bet if guys had to go though it they wouldn't last a day :P

[Sarah Lynn]

Well isnt he lucky ! you're lucky to , i hate myself when i pms . lol

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

i hope this doesnt make me sound silly whats PMS? haha :P havnt heard that one before :P
thanks :)

[Sarah Lynn]

Ohh...oh boy ... lol where are you from ? If you dont mind me asking . It means Premenstrual syndrome . Its just another word for all the effects on your personality while you have your period . So if you're being a b***h someone will be like "well shes pmsing" lol

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Lmao Australia but no one has mentioned that word to me ever so i didnt know haha.
Thanks i know now :P

[Sarah Lynn]

Haha no problem !

[Night]

Haha! Okay, wow! This is brilliantly written...and somehow, I want to laugh. We sure do get dangerous when that time comes around:D

Keep Writing!

[Sarah Lynn]

Yes we certainly do ! lol Thank you !

[Caradoc]

This just makes me think of that SNL skit with the pill that makes it so woman's period comes only once a day in a year...lol. And then she goes around with a pink axe trying to murder everyone. That was hilarious.

-Caradoc

[Sarah Lynn]

Lol ive never seen that , i dont really watch SNL but im glad you go ta kick out of it lol

[Caradoc]

You should watch it. It's hilarious.

[Caradoc]

Interestingly enough, I've heard tell of scientific studies done that theorize that men have their own version of PMS. I haven't looked into it, but the idea is interesting. I mean, there is a syndrome that causes men to experience pregnancy symptoms alongside their pregnant wife so I guess it's possible...