Trapped

As i sit and watch the days passing by 

I can feel my spirit slowly dying inside 

I can feel my motivation just dying out 

While everyone else's is just flying about 

I see my bright sunny days surely turning to gray

How did my life even get this way ?

Crying on the inside smiling on the out

Is this what life is really all about ?

Never being happy and always feeling sappy

Watching others always having a " bright and cheerful day " 

While you just sit there letting life pass you away .

This world is so big and so full of life 

I just cant seem to pull myself out though , out of this dark constant night.

While others are warm and bright , i'm dark and cold.

I wish life would finally let my story unfold. 

But my life's going no where , no where at all.

I guess until then ill just sit here.. sit here staring at this plain blank wall..

Reviews

[Eagle Cruagh]

This is a sad mood to dwell in----- so come to me
and listen to my tale of chase`n cattle on the
old Chisome Trail, or something else that might
make your day-----I`ll tryl
Thanks for the contribution.
----- Eagle Cruagh

[David Burke]

That describes exactly how I feel right now, another great job hun

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Very sad depressing emotional peace.
Really felt your emotions through it, it has very much meaning to it as well.
I love the rhyming scheme as well.
Sucks that you are feeling like this though i do hope things get better.
Great write :)

[hmarieee]

This is a great one too! You are a great writer! Keep up the good work hun.
-hannahmarie xo

[Sarah Lynn]

Thank you so much ! (:

[mark]

wow touching piece. very well written had great rhyming to it.
keep your head high don't give up.
i'm going through a depressing stage in my life but the worst thing is to give up. things will get better you just gotta believe in that.
great write once again :)

[Sarah Lynn]

Thank you so much ! & Thank you for the advice. Life just sucks sometimes, it really really does. Dont you give up either !

[mark]

you're welcome :) yeah it does im going through allot at the moment. almost making me actually get depressed and i dont want to go through that stage.
i won't :) i have to stay positive no matter how hard things get.

[Sarah Lynn]

Thats right ! Well you keep your head up and i will too !

[mark]

will do haha :)