Where did the time go ?

I wrote this poem when i was 15 i believe. I made it for my mom obviously. But hope you all enjoy it and give me some feedback i can learn from !

November 4th 1993

That's the day you gave birth to me.

Video recordings ever since  the age of two,

Just to remember all the things i do. 

Cooked me breakfast, lunch and dinner 

Every single day. 

We also used to go out in the rain 

To splash around and play. 

If i came down with the flu, she was always the first 

One with soup and tissues.

She would even fluff my pillow and tuck me  in !

I got older, she did to.

Harder to agree on things to do.

Now i'm in high school , 

Everything's changed.

Now that i'm older things will never be the same.

I thank her though,

Oh so dearly , for giving me all i could possibly dream.

I have no regrets , not one at all. 

All i want to say is thanks! I love you mom!

Reviews

[BlueberryKisses]

This is amazing! Well done :) you're very talented and I'm sure your mom loves this poem!

[annabellee]

Aw this is a gorgeous poem. Mom's are just the best and this is a lovely reminder for your mom. I bet she was very happy reading this.
I really like your stuff, you're very talented. Keep up the good work :)

[Lydia Shutter]

What a lovely write of appreciation for your mom. I am sure she cherishes it till this day. So emotive. Moms do all that and don't even think about it, but to know your daughter appreciates it, well, that makes life so much sweeter. Thank you for sharing this with us. lydi**

[Sarah Lynn]

Thank you so much! The positive feedback really means a lot !:)

[Neon]

The best poem i've ever read am truly sayin'. I loved this poem you really made me emotional. This poem touched my heart, it's ripped my heart off. I've never read such kinda emotional piece from anyone.. thanks for writing and sharing here on the site. Yes, time really moves very fast... it just leaves some memories of it. You got me through your poem, by our words. Your a very talented writer and it's true. Very beautiful work, this's a open heart that cries for time... how the time's gone. An excellent work.

[Sarah Lynn]

Aww! Thank you so much! That really means a lot to me! I was pretty emotional when i wrote it even, but I'm glad you enjoyed it! :)