When Does it Hurt?

When you think you have a chance

When you find out the hard way

When friendship is more important

When you're too young

Too old

Too ugly

Too fat

Too good

Too bad

When facts outweigh feelings

When love becomes loss

When living becomes losing

And you give it all up

For one false moment

Reviews

[Jaeda]

I like your rhythm. Personal hurt simplified to a stanza with flow. Goody. :)