Daddy's Little Girl [Not..]

I wrote this about my Dad, who hurts me way too often.

I remember when I was so small,

And my Daddy stood there, strong and tall.

Those days are gone, so far away.

Because of what you dare to say.

 

A Dad should be open and free,

Not hurting, or insulting me.

What bugs me most, makes me mad;

Is you've never really been a Dad.

 

Instead, the only thing at home,

Is a man so rude, never known.

I wish I had my father here,

To make me smile, and stop the tears.

 

When I meet the man, who treats me right.

We'll plan a wedding, start a life.

And I'll have to fake that anxious smile,

When I walk myself down the aisle.

 

When I grow up, my kids will ask,

"Where is Grandpa, Where's your Dad?"

I'll have to lie, and shake my head.

Say to them sadly, "To me, he's dead."

 

It's too late for you, there's just no hope.

So go drink your beer, and smoke your dope.

And watch the women, decide who's hotter.

But guess what sir, you lost your daughter.

 

Sarah Hunt

 

Author's Note

Just tell me what you think. =]

Reviews

[ThereWasBloodEverywhere]

This is ah-mazing. :)
And I Love It.

[Autumn Reign]

beautiful.

the second to last verse was perfect.

[BEEGE]

I hate you had to experience this.
But just see it as one of the many bumps
on the road to success in the future. And success
is to be defined by you not society. I think this was
well written and a lot of emotion was poured into it.
Its extremely sad, but a good read.
Keep ya head up young one.
Nice job.

BeegE

[Wildecat]

This is so sad, Children are a precious gift from God. No one should ever be abused. This is a wonderful poem. My heart goes out to you. I wish you all the best and hope your dreams come true.

[Samuel Dickens]

It breaks my heart to hear that you've been so mistreated--and by someone who should have loved you and protected you like no other. For the life of me, I can't understand it. I had bad parents, too, and probably would have been better off in foster care, but I wasn't. I just hope that you will rise above it all and continue to blossom and grow into the wonderful person that I sense you are.
You've written a really good poem, too. It is well-worded and does an outstanding job of telling your story.

[sarahkatherine]

Thanks.

[(:]

It expresses the lives of kids whoms parents aren't so great. I do like this a lot though. It kinda reminds me f my dad in a way...