My Wish and Reality

I was depressed (again) so i wrote this

This gouge
In the inner depths
Of my very soul
Is filled with darkness
I wish 
It could only be filled with light
That I could be good enough
For even
When I try to be
I never measure up
We never meet
I'm the night
You are day
And there will not be an eclipse
Not now 
And when you are there
Waiting
There for me
It makes my heart sing 
This simple gesture
Puts me into a frenzie of hope and passion
Is this wrong of me?
Why do I even believe in my own thoughts 
When I will never know yours
Are you a sheild? 
or a sword?
I know it's never quite that easy 
But you can easily tell the difference, just look in to my eyes
They are different shallow in most places
to hide the inner depths of others
But yours are so deep 
they look like a mirror on the outside
But I know
It's an act
A good one
To help 
Bur still an act 
Just give me a glimpse
Of the real you
I won't tell 
 

Reviews

[bluessadmood]

This flowed so smooth..and went so deep even with words so simple
I loved the feelings and the images you printed here..how lovely..
My soul lived with darkness how i wish I could see the light
feel like I am the night and you are my day,so how could we meet
there will never be an eclipse for me..i know and still i wait
it makes my heart sing just seeing you,but you hide and i believed
when will i ever know you,as you always hide away
just give a glimpse of you and i wont tell..a sign for me
this was so lovely..you have such a sense of feeling your way
and your words are much deeper than what they seem or look
lovely write..

[Eden]

I really like this...

[MoonlitAngel]

Heartshattering, and I can see many people underestimating the pain behind this. Oh my god, does it torture me to think of the confusion.. The pain behind it. Keep writing. I would like to read more sometime. I can hoenstly say that I can connect with this. Also... Two typos that I saw. One is shield. you spelled it wrong. the other is but.. You put bur. If you reread it, you'll be able to find it most likely. :)

--Blood