First Loves

First loves are a miraculous glimpse of heaven, but they can be whisked away as quickly as they are formed. They are filled with passion that can never be recreated. They give you a temporary sense of love and belonging. That feeling that you're creating your own love story. Its unfortunate that most of these love stories end in tragedy.

Author's Note

I don't really know i just found this one day i guess i wrote it awhile ago haha

Reviews

[Hailey]

yes its very true, most of the time they do end in tragedy, but i disagree with the fact that it can never be recreated. that has been disproved many times. take romeo for example, he got over rosaline pretty quickly XD
anyways, lovely write. deep feeling and truthful meaning, sounds like it came from the heart. good job, keep it up

[A]

Tis' indeed. Oh well, that's life these days I guess.

Anyway, very nicely written. :D

[Jeff Miller]

Well it's amazing.