Fairy Tales

I long for a fairy tale romance
A love that fills my soul with an infinate ecstacy.
A love that can make the weak strong 

A love that takes my breath away whenever i see  "him."
A love that i would risk my life for, that never dies, that goes beyond forever and always. A love that is strong but delicate.
I long for a happily ever after.
 

Author's Note

i dont think this one is very good

Reviews

[Skyman]

yup this is like number 7 i've reviewed and rated

[Star Shyne]

i loved how at the first and last line you wrote "i long for a..." and how every other line started with "A love". enjoyed it very much. wonderful read & write.

[Vesa Lee]

You know what?
I think this is wonderful...
To be honest. To be real. To be venerable enough write and post this is a wonderful thing.
And I'm so glad you did...because I feel the same way.
A deep and lasting desire to be loved is something I think we all can identify with, and it's always so soul-lifting when we read of others who are right there with us.
Believing in the magic of love, and the beauty that is a happily ever after. ^-^
Great write.

[Jeff Miller]

I hope you find it with whoever you want. Because you deserve to be happy each and every moment for the rest of your life. And it is too good! Maybe just expand more is all, but it's great for how small it is.

[A]

Some parts of the poem lacked, but once again, you made it so it all lead up to a good impactful ending. I really like this sort of style. xP