Isolation

My first "real" poem. I've dealt with depression throughout high school, and I think poetry is a good outlet to vaguely express how I felt during that time.

Instant uncertainty, severe adversity

I struggle to translate thoughts into words

We've crossed paths, but will we ever again?

Separation is heaven for me

But others refuse to comprehend 

Countless times I've tried

But no one can fathom my desire to be alone

I am loved, yet concurrently, abandoned

Reviews

[Stephen]

Such kinda thoughts always come from the depth of the heart when we're alone. Loneliness's the way which help us releasing our feelings, emotions, pain and aches of heart go into the words through writing stuffs. Those stuffs which're written from with the heart always impacting the readers mind..because a reader always love reading real stuffs through the real feelings of heart reflects.

I adore this poem. It's well written!
Keep posting!

[Sara Bowering]

Thank you so much! I will! :)

[Stephen]

My pleasure!
I'd love to have you on my pages too!

[A. Amos]

This is interesting and mesmerizing piece, simply beautiful

[Desert Rain]

What interesting insight into who you are. The first two lines were hook-line and sinker: really well written, really stood out, grab the readers attention. I can understand this emotion and relate to it a little bit. For me at least, it reminded me of the times I've been in a room full of people I know but felt like a stranger.
Thank you for sharing. :) Keep posting and sharing your work on Cafe.

[Sara Bowering]

Thank you so much Ashley! I definitely will!

[Desert Rain]

Most welcome Sara.

[Emily]

Love how you worded it! Good job!

[Sara Bowering]

Thanks Emily! :)