swing sets

i was at the park swinging (idc if im "to old" to swing lol) with my friend and this poem kinda popped in my head so as soon as i got to her house (sleep over) i wrote it...enjoy

 

Swinging

Like dreaming

Is (for lack of better word) annoying

At first you push and pump

push and pump

to get as high as you can go.

Just when you think you are about to fly

gravity comes

and forces you back down

to reality

Author's Note

all comments apreciated...thank you!

Reviews

[universalove]

this is really nice. and it could be took in different ways than the playground.