In an Abandoned Mental Hospital

This story is about two theives who rob a bank and then decides to hide out in an abandoned mental hospital that is haunted.

 

The sun begins to rise, and then glare strea straight in the window and cast a very sharp shine onto Louie's fall.

He begins to stir, he wrestles his hair than struggles to open his eyes.With all of that sunlight glaring.

He rubs his eyes,and then begins slowly fluttering his eyes open, to his amazement his partner in c rime willie is still sleep between two females.See,Louie he comes from the south,so he has a Southern slang.Willie he's up there from Yankee Country New York C ity. So,its two different attitudes,two different temperaments,two different agreements.

 

"Willie, who are these two broads?"replys Louie. Willie eyes flutters open, then he wiped them trying to focus in on what louie was talking about. Then he saw two voluptuous women of the white persuasion and he replied<"They're my dates, don't you remember"What happened to your date?" Louie replied,"Guess, she left,her lost."

 

Willie slowly started scanning the room looking to see if that bomb louie brought in was somehow sexily lounging somewhere,cause louie clearly forget about her."With that in mind willie asked louie was up.

Louie replied,"Get rid of the ladies, we got to finish making plans for you know what." Willie lazily rolled over

ans whispered to them to get dressed and leaves.As the ladies transcended up grabbingtheir clothes and commenced to putting them on,willie got up to went to the bathroom to wash his face. When he all of a sudden heard louir letting the women out. After locking the door behind them he turned an ran to the room to straighten it up.So, they could finish making plans to rob the bank this afternoon.

 

Willie came out of the bathroom, and stood in front of the mirror to admire his physique. He noticed the color of his hair which was strawberry blonde,sea green eyes,a muscular six-pack torso, alright legs. From the glance in his eyes, he looked at louie which was a thin scrawny young man of 29 yrs.old.Then he said to himself,"Louie ol boy! you need to work on that scrawny young body of yours.Willie then proceeded to shake his head in disbelief."

Louie entered the room and replied,"Come in the livingroom when you finish dressing."So, we can go over the plans before we leave for the bank.

 

After dressing willie went into the livingroom to see what the rush was, he replied,"Ok,Louie gert antsy now.This is your idea.Willie replied,"I know and I'm not antsy.I just wanted to make sure we're claer on a few details

Louie replied,"Oh,you alright want to take about it.Willie replied,"No,I'm kn now, but anyways. We have masks,jackets,gloves,caps,and tote bags,rope if needed." Louie replied,"Good, that's tooken care of." I know exactly what time the guard goes to  lunch." Wllie replied,"Ok, you'll thenm go to the nearst tekller an hand her the note on it will be "THIS IS A STICK UP HAND OVER THE MONEY,PUT THE MONEY IN THE BAGS AN YOU WON'T GET SHOT. How does that sound louie.Louie replied,"Just great to me, The driver will be in place right."Wllie replied,"Yes,he'll be here in 30 mins. Louie replied,"Good, then I won't worry about that part of the robbery.

 

Once all the details were tooken care of. The bank robbers ride came right on time. Once in the car, they put they're masks on, then gloves on and they're hunting gear on. They made sure they're guns were loaded and ready to shoot if need be. The van pulled up to the front door, just as the guard was going to lunch.

"Hurriedly, Louie got out first then willie the driver nerv ously sat watching and hoping an praying they would hurry up. As they entered the bank willie made a beline to the very first teller, handed her the note and repeated to her what was already on the note.The teller looked surprised and shocked and did what she was told.

 

Louie replied,"Everybody stand where you are, this is a stick up!!!! people started screaming and immediately

started laying on the floor." Willie was hurring the teller along and then he grabbed both gnags. Then patted louie on the back as some form of signal. That it was time to go.Louie yelled,"Stand down and no one gets hurt."

No, one moved they just laid down with their faces to the ground.as the bank rob bers backed out the dorrs. The driver kept the engine running and once they had gotten inside the car.They sped off at top speed towards the abandoned mental hospital over on the east side of town, as they race away at top speed.

They were hooping and hollering in celebration of their victory in a clean getaway.

 The driver turns onto a one way street where the mental hospital is located. They pulled into the garage of the building and immediately began hooping on top of each other, roughing up each other's hair, and tossing a small pile of money in the air. That they had dumped on the floor of the garage.

 

All of a sudden out of the corner of the driver's eye, he saw a couple dark shadows quickly moving. He begins to tap willie and louie on the shoulder to get their attention. They both replied,"What!!! and the driver replied,"Look over there, do you two see what i see or is it my imagination."

They both spun aroung and came face to face with a roomful of raging ghosts. All three screamed as the ghost started attacking and ripping trhem apart. I guess they won't be needing that money after all.

Author's Note

I need to work harder on my characters languages.