At The Zoo At Night

this story is about matt and his friends bonzo and gary.They use the bars as a zoo at night.Matt is particulary trying to find a lady to have a lasting relationship with.

 

"As Darkness Falls, Matt stands in his doorway." Wondering what in the world he would say to the woman of his dreams."

"He and his buddies are all preparing to go to the Jazz Bar on Saturday night to see if they could pick up some chicks tonight."

"He wonders if she wouldeven recognize him," So, he decides to saunter on to his room to choose what he wanted to waer.""He's taken his shower,shave, and put on his silk boxers,he pulls out his jewelry box and picks out his golden cuff links,opened his tie box and pulled out his red silk tie to go with his tuxedo shirt."

After, he finished getting dressed.""He turned on Nancy Wilson an listened to her version of Stormy Weather."

 

"Matt starts to reminisce about how hiim and his friends stalk the babes at the Jazz Bar. "They're routine is as follows. We Saunter over to the bar, we then ask the bartender for a couple beers."As always, the group of woman they're watching are exactly where they always are.""At the end of the Bar, to the left, in th third row of booths, down on the left hand side.

"As his mind wonders he thinks about they're Las Vega "Hangover" night. Before, he could blink ,a knock cacme at the door."

"He ran to answer the door as he opened the door.He Yelled," Hey Bonzo, What's up?:""Bonzo replys,"Hey dude,"as he gives him a bear hug."" re we ready?"Bonzo reply's,"Matt replys,"In a moment, you know Bonzo I', going to talk to that woman in the bar."

 

Bonzo reply's,"But, she doesn't know you're alive." Matt reply's,"Oh,She will after I club her over the head.""They both laugh, as they head to the door to leave.Matt reply's,"Oh,yeah her name is Nahlia."

Author's Note

What do you think of dialogue.

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[jackie]

Since I'm a newbie, i think my weakness is dialogue,and my style is getting better.