all to me

i wanted to share with you my words;

place them in your palm, kiss them on to

your skin,

and leave them there, in your hands, blending into the swirls

of your fingertips.

 

and now -

they are yours, to do with what you will.

i will never take them from you

(no one ever can)

 

i wanted to share with you my secrets, remind you

of your goodness;

i wanted to hold you tight, then set

you free.

 

i wanted you… (for a moment),

all to me.

Reviews

[Raja]

Yes, when we are writing somethig for our near ones, it is like ode to that person with whatever form our work is holding. We never shy of keeping it in any good pacakage. Just the honest giving will serve our purpose.

Here you with your majestic touch of simple words make that happen. I owe to all to you for writing such a nice philosophy.

"they are yours, to do with what you will.

i will never take them from you

(no one ever can)"

Really no one ever can...

Thank You.

Raja.

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What a beautiful expression of unconditional love. Lovely ! It was a joy to read it. Thank you for sharing.

[Wolfwind Words]

This was beautiful; Reminded me of a young child wanting to keep the baby bird all to themselves but knowing that they had to let it fly free in the end.

I think this piece was flawless in it's form and color!

The last line was the best. So simple, yet full of meaning. Something that i think everyone can relate to.

I enjoyed reading this!
Infinity's Shadow

[robin]

mmm this one flows so freely without any seeming, and transparent yearning is ...it slowed time for me and my thoughts went adrift as I fell into this...awesome

[Deborah Leah Krempa]

Well written, a lovely poem. Thank you for sharing. Debileah