duckling dreams: a haiku

i have to giggle a little

dare i to touch her?
my webbed feet in silent plea,
beg her... to love me.

Reviews

[Blackbirdsong]

I have to tell you, the title alone forced me fight back an awww and I'm not the kind of person who says that...but still I trudged on, machete in hand to bridle my emotions...anyway...love this haiku...there is a tender sweetness to this and I didn't feel like saying awww, but now I want a baby duck for a pet. :)

[the_stoic]

i picturised as this - the duckling is quacking and this is the way you have deciphered it ! sweet

[windowguy]

A lovely write.

[absurdist!]

Ahmahgah cute poem ahmahgah ahmahgah.

[Sparrow]

Haha this was heart meltingly sweet. Great piece and thanks for the submission to my contest.

-Sparrow

[An owl on the moon]

You delve so deeply into the subconscious with this one. I can sense a Hans Christian Andersenion liquid running ever so slowly through the ink. The year: 1844. A duckling becomes a beautiful swan. Such depth in your haiku. Unbelievable. Almost inconceivable...

[John Taylor]

Well, I don't know what I can say that hasn't already been said. It's cute, I know that much�

[Aaron Thompson]

Without a doubt, this was the sweetest haiku I've read�ever. Nice work.

[c. d. dylan]

this was so cute, my entire body turned into cotton candy. great job!

[Dawn Jones]

I'm a duckling. Those are my dreams... how'd you know?

I like this. It's cute.

[SweetPeachesAlways]

Cute and fun! Good job!